First Draft

Here you can see our first draft. We used this first draft to help us reflect and grow on our learning. We got feedback from our teacher and our friends.

We created a success criteria in class to help guide us on which areas of our Oracy to improve in.

Writing Inspiration

Our High Street provided the perfect inspiration for excellent writing. We learnt all about adjectives and nouns to write our sensory descriptions. We learnt all about instructions and imperative verbs to persuade someone to come to our shops! Open the pdf to view some excellent examples!

Reflections on our learning

Find below our reflections on our learning. We thought carefully about what we were proud of, what we found difficult, and what are targets for future learning should be! Open the pdf to check out Heart group's reflections!