Here is some advice for you to consider while you're drafting:
This prompt has two parts – one about the legacy of slavery, and the other about actions we must take.
Without very clearly defining the legacy of slavery as you see it first, the solutions will not make sense. The solutions arise from how you’ve defined the legacy - the solutions should be ideas for how to lessen the effects of whatever the legacy is!
The more specific the solutions, the more convincing you are! It's not enough to say "we need to treat everyone with equality" - HOW are we going to go about doing that?? List specific things we could be doing differently!
Questions to ask yourself while drafting to help you put together your arguments:
How has slavery (and its fall-out) shaped the state of Oregon and the demographics of Portland?
How has slavery (and its fall-out) shaped the societal elements (the economy, our educational system, governmental systems, how we view ourselves as a country, etc. etc.)?
Say a white family never had ancestors who owned slaves…what are ways they still might have profited from slavery (and its fall out) over the generations?
Say an African American family moved here 30 years ago and never had ancestors who were enslaved…what are ways they still might have had to deal with the fall out from slavery today?
In case you're curious how other countries have dealt with inequalities in their pasts, here is a list of countries that have instituted reparations of some kind to try to make up for past ills:
South Africa
Chile
Morocco
Germany
Canada
Cambodia
On their website, the Pew Research Center says that they are "a nonpartisan fact tank that informs the public about the issues, attitudes and trends shaping the world. We conduct public opinion polling, demographic research, content analysis and other data-driven social science research."
Use them for any fact/statistics you might need to enhance your arguments!
Our Parkrose Library has access to the Gale online search database, which has access to hundreds of articles, op-eds, primary sources, infographics and more, all organized by topic! So come here to get additional perspectives as you need them (for example, maybe your angle on the legacy question will be all about affordable housing - come here to see what people are saying about affordable housing issues!)
Password: Parkrose
Read through this example essay from last year to get a sense for how the synthesis argument might look
Here is a list of the strengths/weaknesses that the different class periods noticed in the sample essay this week:
Strengths:
Clearly explained solutions to the problem
Lots of pathos
Good use of sources and research (multiple groups noticed this!)
Lots of evidence/examples provided (multiple groups noticed this too!)
Solutions section of the paper was well written
Strong message/main claim
Writing voice/style keeps us interested and hooked
Weaknesses:
More of a counterargument would help the points feel more grounded and thorough
Some evidence and claims felt extra - they didn't all need to be there and overshadowed some of her other points
Intro doesn't 100% match what the rest of the argument says
Argument sort of wanders away from the prompt and becomes an argument about policing
Could have done a final edit/polish to fix all the last minute typos, etc.
A little boring - could have added more author voice and/or rhetorical techniques of her own
Transitions could have been better - the flow is a bit choppy
The policing section turns into a bit of a rant
Solutions section of the paper could have been more thorough