Mon - Fri: 9:30-10 am and Mon, Tues, Thurs: 1-1:30pm
Need a time that's not during office hours?? E-mail Ms. KP to set one up!
Bring step 1 with you to your one-on-one writing conference (sign ups next week!)
Be sure to do steps 2 and 3 to get ready for week 3 of class!
The questions in this attached questionnaire are the things I want to discuss in the one-on-one writing conferences we'll start this semester with. I want you to think about your answers ahead of time so we can have the most productive conversation possible! Fill it out and bring it with you to your appointed conference time!
Watch this video from the English department at Oregon State to get a sense for what imagery is!
Watch this video to get a sense for what tone is!
Use this list of tone words to assist you when you're trying to identify tone in a passage. This isn't a full list - there are lots of other tones out there! But this might give you some ideas if you're struggling to identify a tone in something.
Read the passage below. Then answer the imagery and tone questions about it in the padlet below!
"It is time for the baby’s birthday party: a white cake, strawberry-marshmallow ice cream, a bottle of champagne saved from another party. In the evening, after she has gone to sleep, I kneel beside the crib and touch her face, where it is pressed against the slats, with mine. She is an open and trusting child, unprepared for and unaccustomed to the ambushes of family life, and perhaps it is just as well that I can offer her little of that life. I would like to give her more. I would like to promise her that she will grow up with a sense of her cousins and of rivers and of her great-grandmother’s teacups, would like to pledge her a picnic on a river with fried chicken and her hair uncombed, would like to give her home for her birthday, but we live differently now and I can promise her nothing like that. I give her a xylophone and a sundress from Madeira, and promise to tell her a funny story."
-Joan Didion
Now that you have the hang of it - look at the sample passage attached below. Identify important power words, images, and tones in the passage. Then, write an analysis paragraph explaining how the imagery and tone shows an important subconscious message in the passage! There's a paragraph template in google classroom!