Marking Period 1
Some of the things that I did well on this assignment were that I was able to understand what I needed to write about and how I was supposed to order different pieces of information in an order that would make sense and that would informative and how different point of view can really affect a story based on whos telling it.
Something that I could have done better on with this assignment is that I had a lot more information on women entering the workforce but not as much on African Americans joining the workforce the document was also not properly cited and some of the information that was on the document was all over the place and talked about topics that were irrelevant to the assignment
Marking Period 2
What I did well on this assignment is that I was able to put information that was important for the topic I was covering in certain places that went along with the rest of the information. I was able to understand what information was more important and better went along with what I was trying to say and I also was able to structure the whole presentation in a way the was very simple to understand.
Some things that I could have done better on with this assignment was be more clear with my thought on the matter and make my arguments much more clear so the reader could better understand my stance on this topic and after a awhile my information just became repetitive.
Marking Period 3
84%
What I did well on this document is that I was able to understand the words and their meaning and using them in to create a story that accurately used their correct definitions to make the story have correct historical context and made sense for its time and was easy to understand for someone reading it.
70%
What I went wrong with when it came to this assignment was I had chosen to write a poem about this year's law day theme "Voices of Democracy" the poem I had submitted was very rushed and did really give any or much context as to what it was trying to tell the reader and what it wanted them to understand.
Marking Period 4
88%
What I did well with this assignment was that I was able to pull evidence from 7 sources and make connections between them and was able to determine what amendments were being violated and they related to the overall theme of what I was trying to write about.
71%
What I could have done better with this assignment was that I didn't write enough about the war I did not talk about how the soldier might have felt and I didn't make any connections or past events that were very similar and compared them that well and many of my sentence were run-ons