MEMORABLE/SIGNIFICANT: How does the writer make Marco a memorable character

Besides focussing on the change in character using paired opposites (from modest to cocky), one has to describe the SHOCK of the change.

"This change is memorable because I did not expect Marco to be so affected by the arrest. After all, he had said that he would go if Eddie wished him to. However, perhaps the public humiliation or shock of leaving in front of this way made him want to shame Eddie publicly as well. The consequences of Marco's spit also makes me realise that Eddie will probably have to suffer later like Vinny whom Eddie mentioned had betrayed his Uncle, making this scene memorable with an important change in character and their fates.

CHARACTER: Do you agree that Mr. Chawla is a noble/admirable character?

This person did well in stating their impression and explaining why the character's behaviour creates that impression. She also elaborated on the consequences of that behaviour on others.

Furthermore she contrasted the character's behaviour with his role as a father.

Lastly she ended by linking the idea of noble/admirable to being a good role model.

Relationship: How is Eddie and Beatrice's relationship significant in the play?

Good that the writer attempted to show how the relationship would affect the reader by covering the perspective from both Eddie and Beatrice's side to give a complete picture.

Relationship: In what ways does Desai make the relationship between Pinky and Sampath a tender one?

Good connection between the current relationship and past relationship to show the change. Could have started with bad to good rather than the other way around to prove your point better