This week we are starting our persuasive writing.
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Nau mai, haere mai ki 2021
This week we are going to be focussing on using correct punctuation and using a variety of different sentence starters. Of course you still need to pimp your writing with metaphor, adjectives and lots of other flash words.
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Latest prompt
We have another mystery for this week. The prompt is:
…I didn’t remember putting it on…
Things to think about:
What is ‘IT’?
Why does it matter?
What is the mystery?
Is it going to cause trouble?
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We have part of a sentence this week. Please remember to use it EXACTLY as it is written here
…he felt really ill…
Things to think about:
Had he done something to make him ill?
What might be the consequences?
Will his illness be a problem for others?
The form will close at 23.45 UKtime on 27th November 2020
If you look very carefully at night, as the mist disappears, the shadow still stands there, guarding his home. No one has ever seen him, only his shadow. His boat travels silently up and down the river every night. High in the tree, the door remains shut, lit only by a single light. No visitors are seen, no noises heard, only the slight creaking of the wooden path leading to and from the tree.
Then one night, everything changed. The shadow was gone and left in its place a …
Chose a prompt we made last term and write a story to match!
This week we are going to be focussing on using correct punctuation and using a variety of different sentence starters. Of course you still need to pimp your writing with metaphor, adjectives and lots of other flash words.
Click on this link and make a copy and rename it. You must file in your tuhituhi kōpaki.
Make a copy of this slide deck and choose how you are going to solve the problem. Remember you must use the writing example to plan your solution.
I was puzzled. Things just kept disappearing from our garden. At first it was just small things, like my toy car , then larger things began to go missing. Dad’s lawnmower vanished. Mum’s favourite plant pot with her favourite plants in. Gone! Just gone!
My parents kept saying that there were thieves on our street. I believed them. Of course I believed them! Why wouldn’t I believe them, they’re my parents?! Sneakily, I got into the habit of looking out of my bedroom window with my camera, in the hope that I would catch a snapshot of the crooks in action.
One afternoon, after I had got in from school and done my homework, I stood at my bedroom window. I was ready. I had my camera in hand. I then watched in amazement and shock as the giant oak tree, that had stood in our garden since before I was born, was dramatically wrenched from the ground by an unseen force. Its great branches and straggling roots and shaking, green leaves began to be pulled towards a hole, the size of a pound coin, in our garden fence. I watched as the tree began to be squeezed, again by this unseen force, through the hole in the fence.
A minute later I was standing with my camera at the ready, peering through the hole in the fence, desperate to find out what had happened to all the things from our garden. Then…I felt it…My eye began to feel as if it was being squeezed. My head felt as if it was being pulled towards the fence. My whole body seemed to be moving. Suddenly…Pop!
Can you continue the story? What was on the other side?
Toby poked his large, shaggy head out of his front door and sniffed. He loved the smell of the forest, especially first thing in the morning. He could almost taste the fresh, leafy goodness on his slobbering tongue as he dangled it out of his yawning mouth.
He could hear a rustling noise coming from nearby; one of the others was awake. You see, Toby wasn’t the only dog that lived in the forest…
“You shall go to the ball!” proclaimed the fairy godmother. With a click of her fingers and a swish of her wand, the magic happened, and Cinderella disappeared off into the night on the adventure of a lifetime…
Can you continue the story?
Nellie the elephant packed her trunk and said goodbye to the circus.
Performing at the circus had been Nellie’s life, but last night something terrible had happened. Hopes and dreams had been destroyed, leaving the circus in smouldering ruins. Nellie’s friends had all fled in a dozen different directions to escape the terrible flames.
Exhausted and drained, lonely and afraid, Nellie plodded over the scorched, broken ground as she was forced to forge a new future for herself.
Anxiously staring far into the distance, Nellie could make out a glimmer of glorious green: land that was unspoilt by flames. This glimmer of green represented a glimmer of hope. Nellie began to feel better. Maybe there was hope after all…
If looks could kill…
Things to consider:
What lies behind this door?
Why are you there?
Who lives here?
Are you safe?
This week we have a favourite type of prompt – 5 words.
They all have to go into your writing but they can be in any order. They are
Giraffe Pink Dusty Sang Painful
Focus on using different sentence starters and a range of fantastic words.
Click on the link below to watch a giraffe in the wild. Use this prompt to help you.
We have lots of questions to consider in the prompt this week. It is:
…as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was …
Things to think about:
What is it?
Is it dangerous?
What do you think it is?
What will this mean?
We have lots of questions to consider in the prompt this week.
Things to think about:
How are you feeling
Where are you
What are you going to do?