Writing Your College Essay: The essay provides opportunity for you to show your individuality and creativity in your application. IT IS THE ONLY PART OF THE APPLICATION YOU HAVE FULL CONTROL OVER; TAKE ADVANTAGE! Colleges want to know what makes you special: being the organizer of a community service project, playing in a rock band, being a peer mentor participating in a religious or political group, etc.
Colleges also want you to tell them about those parts of your personality and character that make you different from the rest of the applicant pool. The essay can add personality to a folder filled with paper and data. It is the most exciting and revealing piece of the application, so be prepared to spend a decent amount of time on it!
Check out these tips before you sit down to write your essay:
Be yourself! Too many students make the mistake of attacking essays by asking themselves, “What does the admissions officer want to hear?” This leads to writing that sounds like many other essays and is devoid of any individual personality. Allow for parts of your character to emerge in your writing and be honest in your words. Do not try to be somebody who you are not.
Avoid writing in a strictly biographical style. “I am a Year I at BHSEC. I am interested in studying biology…..” Remember that you have already given them a great deal of factual information in other portions of your application. The essay is an opportunity to elaborate on some of those facts. What do you enjoy about basketball? Why is biology of interest to you?
Pick a topic of genuine interest. You should write about what really interests you. Admissions officers look for commitment, enthusiasm, and passion from applicants. These traits can only come through in your writing if you choose a subject that elicits emotion on your part.
Do not feel that you must be perfect. Many good essays contain admissions of a candidate’s weaknesses as well as strengths. Strengths may seem all the more believable because of the honesty shown in the writing.
Be aware of length limits. Colleges often impose limits on the length of an essay because of the volume of applications they receive. Essays that go well beyond the requested length are likely to annoy the reader and do more damage than good.
Do not attempt to use essays that you have seen in books or on the Internet. Admissions officials have read the same books and are plugged into the same websites. It is illegal to plagiarize and will lead to an outright rejection, if not worse. Do NOT do it!
Proofread, Proofread, Proofread! There is no excuse for any type of error in an essay of this importance. Grammar and spelling errors will detract from the message you are trying to convey. Let someone else (teacher, parent, older sibling) read your essay, both to review clarity and to catch any mistakes you might have missed. Also, read your essay out loud. This is a good way to catch mistakes and hear if something sounds funny or off.
****Final Topic- I would not recommend this final prompt for everyone. It should not be used as an "easy way out." The entire point of the college essay is to show the readers something about you they would not gather from your grades, scores, activities. It is not to simply show you are the best writer in the world. Therefore, even if you got a 100 on a paper about Romeo and Juliet, that does not give them substance as to who you are as a person. Please be cautious if using this prompt and talk to the college office as to whether or not this is a good choice.
What kind of obstacle did you experience?
How you respond to that failure? Feelings, Actions, Thoughts
How did it change your life?
How has it made you who you are today?
What were your internal thoughts/feelings/triggers?
Reflecting back, how have you grown from this experience?
How do you plan to solve it? How would a college education empower you to embark on doing so?
Why is this important to YOU
What was life like before this transition (be brief, with powerful descriptive words)
How has this event/accomplishment changed your life (for better/worse)
**Remember to have a happy ending, growth, development, feeling of empowerment.
Talk about something in your life that is very unique, but something you has made you who you are today
If it is a story of grit and determination, focus on that
Examples: Immigrating to America, Family Life, Best Dancer, Gender/ Sexuality/ Identity/ Acceptance
Make it a POSITIVE story
When did you recognize you were passionate about this?
How do you feed into this passion?
Do you constantly seek to learn and grow more with this concept/ topic/ idea?
Do you plan on studying this in college?
What were your thoughts, feelings, emotional, physical responses to this topic
Show your PERSONAL beliefs
How does this topic impact you and possibly your thoughts on society?
Do your thoughts/feelings/ reactions align with the rest of society?
What are supplement essays?
Supplement essays are additional writing prompts assigned by a college on a particular topic; they maybe optional or mandatory. Essays ranges from 150- 500 words. The range of topics addressed help students to make personal connections to their prospective school.
How are they different from the CA essay?
The purpose of the Common App essay is to create a three-dimensional word picture of the student that engages the admissions in understanding the candidate and what they might bring to their campus. Supplements however may assess your understanding of the school,