Mrs Barker's Writing Group

Persuasive Writing

Cats are better than Dogs V Dogs are better than Cats

Our Mahi

We created a list of persuasive writing success criteria

Here is our shared writing 'Possums'.

Here are our sports ideas


TERM 3: Recount Writing

Monday 20th July

Lesson 1:

WALT: Use descriptive language

Label It. Today we discussed using descriptive language/precise nouns. The tamariki labelled parts of and image.


Tuesday 21st July

Lesson 2

WALT: Use descriptive language

Using WOW words

Today the tamariki wrote interesting sentences about an image.

WE DISCUSSED

-What do you know about sentences?

-How could we make them more interesting?


Monday 27th July and Wednesday 29th July

Lesson 3 & 4

WALT: plan our ideas

Discuss the purpose for the writing?

What do we know about recount writing?

What writing features might we include?

What sort of vocab/sentences?

HERE IS OUR COLLABORATIVE SUCCESS CRITERIA

CLICK ON THE LINK FOR OUR PLANNING SLIDE


Thursday 30th July

Lesson 5

WALT: plan our ideas

Today we did a quick warm up as we needed to capture ideas/notes from the colour run.

The tamariki then started planning their recounts using the burger plan.

And we also annotated an example of a descriptive introduction (or sizzling start)


OUR MAHI - please link here.

Mahi with Mrs Dodds and Mr Barclay

LABEL IT

  1. Make a copy of your chosen image

Tiger, Chameleon, Rabbit, Monkey , Elephant Seal, Zebra, Baby Gorilla (Remember to re name it and put it in your WRITING FOLDER)

  1. Write notes around your image (include interesting/WOW words) describing your image. You could describe what it looks like, what it is doing, include the senses etc.

  2. Create a new SLIDE in your WRITING FOLDER, name it and then using your notes write a very describe sentence (or sentences) about your image.

  3. Make it fancy :) eg publish it and then upload it to your blog. DON'T FORGET YOUR STEMS!!

NOTE...some of you already started publishing your descriptive sentences from the beginning of the term. You could complete those first and then start a new one :)

WORK HARD TAMARIKI!! I look forward to read your fantastic work.

OUR MAHI - please link here.