I like the lady horses best,
how they make it all look easy,
like running 40 miles per hour
is as fun as taking a nap, or grass.
I like their lady horse swagger,
after winning. Ears up, girls, ears up!
But mainly, let’s be honest, I like
that they’re ladies. As if this big
dangerous animal is also a part of me,
that somewhere inside the delicate
skin of my body, there pumps
an 8-pound female horse heart,
giant with power, heavy with blood.
Don’t you want to believe it?
Don’t you want to lift my shirt and see
the huge beating genius machine
that thinks, no, it knows,
it’s going to come in first.
One of my very first attempts at writing a poem was a Golden Shovel poem, and I think this might be my favorite Golden Shovel poem I've ever written. In Golden Shovel poetry, the author takes a short poem from another poet or a line from a poem and creates a new poem using the words from the previous poem. The words are arranged in a single line, word by word, in the right margin. I have provided an example of my own Golden Shovel poem below based on Ada Limon’s poem “How to Triumph Like a Girl” (1976). The bold words are from Limon’s original poem, which I included.
Writing this poem was close to my heart. As I wrote, I thought of the great strength of women and the continued struggle and fight that we have to be seen, heard, and treated with dignity and respect. I wanted to write a piece for my daughter to advise her on how to live in a world where she may feel dismissed, ignored, disrespected, or beaten down. I want her to know that she has strength and that I believe she can do anything she sets her mind to.
A Golden Shovel Poem after Ada Limón
Daughter, at some point you will doubt your strength. Don’t.
The world may ignore, dismiss, or beat you down. You
are resilient. Women are resilient. We want
to be seen, heard, respected. Women have gifts to
share with the world. Use your gifts to lift
others. Inspire, enthuse, and share your talents. My
hope is you dream big and wear your dreams on your shirt
sleeve. Let no one tell you that girls can’t and
shouldn’t. Express your opinions so they can see
you have the strength of 1,000 horses. Ignore the
snide remarks of others and love yourself. Take huge
risks and accept failure. Accept the beating
and learn from it. Many a genius
have failed before finding success. Machine
the power you have within to overcome obstacles that
get in the way. No one thinks
you have to do it all by yourself. There is no
shame in asking for help when you need it. Seek It.
find someone who loves and knows
you are special. Recognize that it’s
not worth spending time going
about obsessing over imperfections. Learn to
let go, to have fun. Come
to embrace and celebrate in
who you are. Daughter, love yourself first.