Sentence Combining Examples
Example: Base clause: The dog ran after the bus.
Sentence to be embedded: The dog is yellow.
Student-generated solution: The yellow dog ran after the bus.
Connecting words to be used as a sentence-combining tool appear in parentheses at the end of a sentence that is to be combined with the base clause.
Example: Base clause: The car stalled.
Sentence to be combined: The car ran out of gas. (because)
Student-generated solution: The car stalled because it ran out of gas.
The element(s) of any sentence to be embedded in the base clause are underlined.
Example: Base clause: The economic forecast resulted in strong stock market gains.
Sentence to be embedded: The economic forecast was upbeat.
Student-generated solution: The upbeat economic forecast resulted in strong stock market gains.
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