Half portrait

• What is working well?

• What could be strengthened?

         What i thought worked well in this photo, was the detail on the nose, mouth and eyes, i think i shaded them pretty well, and you can see the detail on the eyes iris and pupil. you can also see the perspective on the nose, where it dips down into shadow. what i think could be stregnthend would be my background shading, as i did not have time to do it all. i feel like icould have done better with the collar of his shirt, as it looks like its been shaded roughly and quickly.