We all know that the first line of any written text has to hook the audiences attention. You can use any number of strategies:
rhetorical question
anecdotal story
shocking statistic
slogan
These are just some common attention-grabbers. Your paper needs to start with an engaging hook that gets the reader interested in the topic at hand: your future!
Look at the guy in the picture on the right. Where is he? What's the story? We really need some background or contextual information to tell us who he is and how he got there.
The couple of sentences after the hook is the same. Basically, what connects the hook to the thesis statement? What is the background or context that leads in to the the whole reason you are writing this paper? THAT is the background.
This one sentence is the single most important sentence of the entire paper. It's like a light shining in the darkness, guiding the reader along the journey. The thesis should always rely on the writing prompt. So, think about this assignment and all its parts, what do you think your thesis should include?
Remember: a thesis statement should never begin with "In this paper I will talk about..." Nope. Don't do it. Don't even think about it!
A conclusion is the last paragraph of the entire paper. It should not repeat the same information verbatim. Rather, it should synthesize - combine into a coherent whole - all the major points of the paper. It should follow this format:
restate the thesis in different words
1-3 sentences highlighting the main points of the paper
include the insights that you learned and what you will do with this information