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Formative 20th may
I think in this the groupings worked quite well together but does not flow well at all. The start does not make sense and should be brought in on a later board. Some images are way to big too
Classed based assessment 30th may
This is just a shuffle around of the previous board. I think that the starting off of this board has more relevance but still not the right spot. And definetly need jerry takigawa to go on a later board.
Formative boards 1&2. 27 june
Formative 29 July
I like how it starts of with the granny as this whole thing is about her, I don't feel as if the starting off flows very well. There are some nice groupings in there but just not displayed in the best way possible. The black and white hands aren't really doing anything so just leave them in colour. The jerry takigawa is way better being later on. The flow is feeling better but isn't flowing great. I like the grouping of her looking, glasses and hands and neck.
Final Submission 27 August
The starting off of the board works great as it shows her and her house that she lives in so that works great, it follows into her and her farm arround her. Then we look inside the house and explore inside and it shows her sitting in her seat. Then it goes into her and her skin and shows her wrinkles which for me shows and tells the stories of her life themselves. Then board 2 has a nice flow to it with the continuing of exploring the house and her jewelery box, which then leads into her hands and jewlery on them. For me these hands are what has enabled to do everything she has done today. Which then goes into some still life work which shows nursing badges and farming equipment. Onto board three shows her doing some different tasks and flows into some still life outside in nature, then into jerry takigawa which fits really well on the later board. I really like how the board is flowing and showing her life.
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