TOK Essay Support

The TOK Essay is one of the most challenging parts of the IB Diploma Programme because success depends not only on ideas, but on clarity, argument development, effective use of examples, and alignment with the assessment criteria.

Many students struggle with maintaining focus, developing strong arguments, integrating examples effectively, and sustaining analysis throughout the essay.

I provide examiner-style feedback and coaching designed to help students strengthen organization, improve analysis, and approach the TOK Essay with greater confidence and clarity.

Focused TOK Essay Review — $249

Ideal for students who already have a draft and want clear, targeted feedback before final submission.

Includes:
• One full TOK Essay review
• Detailed written examiner-style feedback
• Feedback on argument development and organization
• Guidance on analysis and use of examples
• Identification of areas limiting higher marks
• Clear suggestions for improvement

TOK Intensive Coaching — $1000

A more comprehensive support package for students seeking ongoing guidance throughout the TOK Essay process.

Includes:
• 3 rounds of detailed written feedback
• 3 private Zoom coaching sessions (60 minutes each)
• Guidance on essay direction and argument development
• Support with examples and essay structure
• Detailed analysis and criterion-focused feedback
• Email support between meetings

Additional sessions or review rounds may be arranged separately if needed.

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TOK Exhibition Support — $199

The TOK Exhibition requires students to connect TOK concepts and prompts to real-world objects in a clear, focused, and well-supported way. Many students struggle with object selection, commentary organization, justification of connections, and maintaining strong alignment with the TOK prompt throughout the exhibition.

I provide examiner-style feedback designed to help students strengthen clarity, improve organization, and develop stronger TOK connections and analysis.

Includes:
• One full TOK Exhibition review
• Feedback on object selection and prompt alignment
• Commentary organization and clarity feedback
• Guidance on TOK analysis and justification
• Criterion-focused improvement suggestions
• Clear written feedback for revision and improvement