peer reviewed

Peer Reviewed by: Kanghyeok LEE

Name of student whose contribution you are reviewing: Eshaan Gupta

Addresses the topic or question? Yes

Is logically organized? Yes

Provides evidence to support the argument? Yes

Cites evidence correctly? Yes

Comments:

The following comments are some of the feedbacks for my group member based on the assignment. This shows some abilities including strengths, weaknesses and improvement details for Eshaan in the future project work with other team. 

Strength: Focus, self-starting attitude, willingness to learn and commitment involved in the project with well-prepared support documentation and knowledge. All the references are correctly formatted in APA 7th edition style and the report is well constructed.

Weakness: Lack of confidence in explaining the idea and finds it difficult to ask for any assistance with the tasks. In addition, spelling mistakes and grammatical errors can be fixed during the report and this must be improved and checked.

Improvement: Overthinking such as procrastination and cautious behavior. Security in cloud protects the user account in many ways, to state the following skills must be explained and considered. In-text-citation also needs to be correctly fixed to proper style.

Reference: All the documents and the material are acknowledged to avoid plagiarism and it's very clear that the ideas are from the supported document. This helps understanding of the topic and also identifies the sources are used to others. Some minor errors in referencing such as in-text citation need to be fixed. For example, quotes need to include page numbers in a parenthetical reference. For these issues, suggested to use https://www.bibguru.com/c/apa-citation-generator/