Peer Reviewed by: Eshaan Gupta
Name of student whose contribution you are reviewing: Junu
Addresses the topic or question? Yes
Is logically organised? Yes
Provides evidence to support the argument? Yes
Cites evidence correctly? Yes
Comments:
Strength: I respect your careful attention to detail. You regularly make sure that our work is precise and error free, whether it's by studying documents, revising report and checking that data is accurate. Your commitment to the project is deeply valued. Project document and content is neatly organised and referencing is in APA 7th edition.
Weakness: I've observed that you have trouble organising your time and goals. You should improve your planning skills and develop schedule for completing task on time. At times, it also can seem difficult for you to receive feedback on the project conclusion report without becoming defensive. Develop an open mindset and should actively listen to feedback is significant for personal growth.
Improvement: In the conclusion the main aspects of cloud can be summarised to provide its features and important uses for future considerations. Grammatical errors and plagiarism should be checked to avoid any misconception. Try to avoid introducing any new information instead try to give importance on the core aspects of the cloud services.
Reference: We are using credible sources for the project such as scholarly articles, books and reputable website. Some error like in text citation need to be improved a bit. APA 7th edition style referencing is been used and plagiarism is also been avoided as much as possible. For example, page numbering should be added to improve formatting and indexing of the report. APA generator is also used.