Peer Feedback Form
Group name: Group-35
Student name: Junu Dulal
Name of student whose contribution you are reviewing: Kanghyeok Lee
The Paper
1) Addresses the topic or question?
=Yes
COMMENT : It effectively addresses the topic of the impact of cloud technology i.e. in the banking industry. It provides an overview of how cloud technology has developed and changed the industry, as well as its benefits and applications in the financial services sector.
2) Is logically organized?
=Yes
COMMENT : It is reasonably organized, with clear sections and subheadings that help structure the content. It begins with an introduction to cloud technology in the banking industry, followed by a discussion on its impact and benefits. The considerations for adopting cloud technology are also presented separately. Overall, the flow of information is logical and coherent.
3) Provides evidence to support the argument?
=Yes
COMMENT : The literature review presents some evidence to support the argument about the impact and efficiency of cloud technology in the banking industry. It mentions the emergence and growth of cloud computing providers. The discussion on efficiency highlights cost savings, operational flexibility, scalability, data management tools, and analytics platforms as evidence of the benefits of cloud technology.
However, the review could have further strengthened its argument by including specific examples or case studies that demonstrate the positive impact of cloud technology on banks.
4) Cites evidence correctly?
=Yes
COMMENT: The literature review includes references and citations to support its claims. It mentions SandP Global (2021) for information on the emergence and popularity of cloud computing providers. The review also cites Cheng et al. (2022) as a source for further reading on the topic.
However, the review could have included more references to scholarly sources or industry reports to provide a stronger foundation of evidence.
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