Projects

I completed a global revision of project 1 by defining 3 major issues and working to alter these to better fit my audience and purpose. This included 1. changing locations of certain sentences to flow better with the overall message of the research essay, as well as 2. altering my analysis to better connect with the main purpose, and 3. further diving into my background to allow readers to better understand my topic. These revisions were made with the purpose to enhance the clarity of my writing. If I were to work differently moving forward on a project like this, I would focus heavily on the composition aspects as well as the content. Although my content is heavy, composition is the difference between a reader understanding it or not.