I chose a quote from Hariot about the religion of the new places he was exploring (Virginia). Not only was there talk about gods and goddesses, but there was an emphasis on how the religion was so different from Christianity.Â
The various gods that Hariot was taught about were called the Montóac. But the people that Hariot was talking to did believe in "one onely cheife and great God, which hath bene from all eternitie" (p. 36). The creation story that they held was different, too; the first person created was not Adam in the Garden of Eden, but a woman. It seems like a small piece of their religion, but the fact that an entire paragraph was dedicated to this fact showed how outlandish Hariot thought this was. Â
Hariot will go on to then talk about how he dropped information about his own religion and how the people of Virgina immediately loved it. Hariot wrote that even though the Bible was not divine in its own right, "... many would be glad to touch it, to embrace it, to kisse it, to hold it to their brests and heades, and stroke all ouer their bodie with it; to shewe their hungrie desire of that knowledge which was spoken of" (p. 40). Hariot had to throw in this embracing of religion to his audience, who were supposedly all of the people back in his country. He had to reinforce the idea that their religion was so much better and that they were so much more advanced, because who could ever believe that a woman was made first?
Raphael takes time to talk to the Cardinal (who I understood to be Thomas's patron) about the idea that people are being hung for petty thievery. That's where I got the main quote for the commonplace; "It seems to me a very unjust thing to take away a man's life for a little money, for nothing in the world can be of equal value with a man's life."Â
As a Criminology major and someone who works in the juvenile justice system, this quote really struck home for me. I've read in class about students who have gotten into fights that landed them in juvie, which then ruined the rest of their lives. We aren't hanging people for thievery anymore, but we are incarcerating them and putting a ton of shame and stigma on them that follows them for the rest of their lives. The amount of juvenile delinquents who can't go back to school and who lose out on job and college opportunities is crazy.Â
Maybe in a perfect Utopia, this will be fixed. Raphael mentioned retributions from Persia, which was interesting because that is now being discussed as a penal alternative.Â
Each color of Post-It Notes represents a different inquisitor of Anne. The amount of questions that she had to sit through multiple times was pretty intense. She then mentions a passage from Proverbs (19) where Solomon said, "That a woman of few words is a gift of God." Before that, she had said, "God hath given me the gift of knowledge but not of utterance." Anne is refusing to answer these questions, not because she doesn't have the answer, but simply because she doesn't want to have to explain herself and her religion to every single person who asks.Â
I also chose this because it represents the ideal woman at the time. It reminds me of when people used to say that children should be seen and not heard; the same went for women long before that. Like... imagine me (ME!) as the silent stoic type?! Nuts. I love hearing women speak.Â
I thought this quote was so beautiful. Right above it, Montaigne described the melding of souls in a friendship where you can't tell where each person starts and the other begins.Â
I applied this quote to my best friend in the whole world, Ella. I've known her since about the 6th grade, but we didn't become close until the 9th. I've spent so much of my formative years with her, and sometimes, I look back on how much we've done and been through together. There's a quote about this a couple of sentences above from the one I chose; "In general, you cannot judge a relationship until the partners have attained strength and stability in mind and in years." Goodness, with everything we've been through, I think our relationship can finally be judged.Â
Montaigne just really made me value my close friendships and was able to put into words how I feel sometimes.Â
Okay, this journal is ugly, but there is a reason for it.Â
I wrote Desdemona's lines in pink, not as the typical girl color, but as a representation of love. Othello's are in green to represent his jealousy. I have Iago's lines coming in off the side of the paper to describe how he sneaks into others' minds and affects them. He is in a darker gray to show his 'smoke and mirrors' effect. I used washi tape to make a blood-dripping effect, but I'm not sure how that came out. I used the blue background to represent the untainted Cyprus sky, because as this goes on (Act 5) the world is essentially unchanged.Â
Out of the few quotes I wrote down, the one I really wanted to focus on was Desdemona's line, "His unkindness may defeat my life, but never my love." To be honest, at the beginning of the play, I wasn't sure how to feel about Desdemona. Her character seemed flat to me. Towards the end, I liked her more; she was a very good friend to Cassio and Emilia and genuinely a good wife. Even when Othello comes at her with an insane accusation, she keeps her cool. Desdemona loves Othello. Even when he's being rude and unkind, she shows concern for him and talks about how she's never seen this behavior from him. She says in the quote that even if he's acting this way, it doesn't affect her love for him.Â
I thought the Marriage and the Household slides were the most interesting. I love the idea of connecting Othello to things that I learned about in my Sociology of Families class (look at me being interdisciplinary!). It made me feel things, none of which were good.Â
The quote Piper chose about "A woman alone was the subject of jest or horror." The fact that women in history have been hinged on men is still happening now. The first time I remember a man being referred to as "x's Husband" was with Simone Biles. But every single woman seems to be referred by their relationship to a man, "This is x's daughter," "x's sister," or "x's partner." It's really frustrating.Â
I love how Piper talks about women's sexuality as it has always existed. Still, the overt way Othello and Desdemona refer to it in the text seems different than expected for this period. But there's also the fact that maybe it's okay because a man wrote it. If a woman had written this work, what would the difference be? But the fact that even the woman's sexuality is attached to a man is insane (thanks, patrilineality). I don't know. I feel like I'm ranting, but I'd almost rather be the subject of jest or horror than have all my characteristics attached to my boyfriend's.Â
Desdemona has been played in the minstrel versions as a joke, as someone who is just seeking this "exotic man," and it sucks. There's surely more to her than solely her attraction, and more than what the men see as drawing her attention.Â
This text got to me. I don't know if it was because I could relate to some of the themes about being an actor or being cast a certain way because of how I look. Obviously, I am not a black man, and I will never understand everything that they've gone through, but reading this? It made me feel so many things.Â
I am an actor; I have gone into auditions, and I have felt like some roles are immediately not for me because of how I look.Â
I composed the background of almost entirely the 'Actor's' inner thoughts. The actor has a name, Keith, but he's never referred to that way in the script itself; he's just an actor. I thought that distinction was really interesting. It allows many kinds of people to relate in a way that doesn't come as naturally to named characters.Â
The fact that this script is essentially one big monologue is astounding. I mean, even though he is not 'acting' in the story, the actor delivers much more heartfelt and relatable lines than any version of Othello ever could. Othello is the titular name of the play, yet all of these lines, these emotions, he doesn't get to express them in Shakespeare's play. The themes here are much more overt, with the actor coming out and saying this. But having all of this over the play Othello was amazing.Â
I have so many thoughts about this play, I'm going to have to cut myself off. I made another journal page (or have plans to, if I don't get a chance to do it) about some of the lines relating to acting that he mentioned in the beginning. Overall, this is probably my favorite thing that we've read in a long time. My favorite of this tandem so far, for sure.Â
Okay, to start off, I couldn't get a better picture because I used metallic markers and the glar made it hard to read. I will retake the picture later and then erase this whole paragraph. Also I think I'm going to try and draw more of the physical landscape behind each section in colored pencil (the steps for heaven, the Trees of Life and Knowledge for Earth, and the fiery gulf for Hell).Â
Anyways, I wrote this journal to emphasize the differences in the way that Heaven, Earth, and Hell were all described. The descriptions for Hell come from Book 1, Book 3 described Heaven, and Book 4 talked about Earth (Eden, specifically). I separated them into their three spheres with Heaven above and Hell below (like Dante would have wanted).Â
Heaven (and its inhabitants are described as having "uniterrupted joy and unrivalled love". While the setting is described in term of riches (what this purposeful? to bring envy to a Satan who covets riches and power?) there is gold and diamond and pearl and jasper.Â
Earth is described as overwhelmingly green, "verduous walls" and "steep wilderness" and "vernal delight". Satan (or the poet) even refer to is as Paradise, but we know it's Eden. A Paradise on Earth.
I used micrography to make this journal post (the act of making a picture with words) because I noticed the idea of language being mentioned quite a lot in the text. Oroonoko and Imoinda shared a language of love that no one else quite understood. I made the representation of a white lily with a description of Imoinda and her actions. The outline of the outer petals is a description of Imoinda as she is described in the first hald of the book, the inner lines of the petals connecting it to the middle is made up of her actions. The very core of the flower is made using her various names, 'the General's daughter', 'Imoinda', 'Queen of Night', and 'Clemene'.Â
The stem, the place where the flower goes into the Earth, is made up of the passages where Imoinda is killed. The leaf is her bravery right before her death, it's nourishing her death and her bravery was what gave the flower (the rest of her) her basis. I found Imoinda incredibly brave. I actually did like her character. The way she's described as going to her death really haunted me, that's why I chose the quote at the top: "the lovely, young and adorned victim lays down before her sacrificer".
The way that she's referred to as a victim feels like it goes so much farther than just her death. She was a victim of the king, then of a slaver, then of her own husband. It really is tragic. Her character broke my heart a little bit.Â
It took me longer than it should have, but I'm actually so proud of this journal. It looks like a lot but I wanted to try and incorporate some of the most whimsical elements of a fairytale. I added a lot of colors, flowers, I even tried to add some sparkles coming out of the wands (I don't know how well my camera capture that
I chose to add fairies from the children's book series Rainbow Magic by Daisy Meadows to represent the childlike nature of fairytales and try to capture that element of the supernatural in a cute way. Each of these fairies were connected to different flowers, some of which did not have a corresponding fairy. So I chose a Rose Fairy (same as name), a Tulip Fairy (same name), a Royal Family Fairy (representing the pomegranate flower), a Unicorn Fairy (carnation), a Reef Fairy (anemone, like what I did there?), a Royal Adventure Fairy (columbine), and a Little Mermaid Fairy to represent to the Fairy of the Fountain (she's in a fountain!). I thought these would all fit into the themes of what happens in the book even though they didn't match the flowers given to the Queen.Â
As for the quote, I chose the one where the fairies endowed Desiree with her gifts. Throughout the tale, I was so focused on the fairies. To me they seemed to be the ones moving the story along and they even created the main character (Desiree). One of them was 'evil' and the Tulip fairy acted almost like a Fairy godmother so it showed the wide range of uses for these little creatures.Â
1001 Nights
Yes, I did draw 98 golden rings and then added the brothers' rings in gray. I counted.Â
I chose this quote because it is like the one thing we've seen that doesn't underestimate women. I support women's rights and wrongs and this is finally something that's giving power to women.Â
The problem that I have with "powerful women" is that it always seems to be derived from some sort of seduction. A lot of strong women in shows or even comics will have the skimpiest outfits and will use their sexual prowess to lure people in. And that's FINE, like GO WOMEN!!! But there's something to be said about sexuality and promiscuous women being seen as the villain or being seen as bad.Â
I have actually so much to say about this so I'm glad I chose it as my discussion.Â
First, I did have those stickers lying around from a Disney/Crayola coloring book (where I also got the jinni on the left from). The right side isn't fully done yet, I plan on learning how to draw shiny gems and placing them around.Â
So yes, Disney is a horrible corporation and there are absolutely thing that I hate about them. One of them being the way that the 1992 version of Aladdin is made of a completely white cast. For a story so focused on being from Persia and India with Aladdin taking place in China this seems completely stupid to me. The only person of color in the cast is Jasmine's SINGING voice played by a Filipino actress. Another thing that I wanted to bring up was a topic that I learned about in a different HUST class (shoutout to Myth, Legends, and History with Dr. Bird). Disneyification is what Disney does when they water down a story or a show or whatever to make it more marketable towards kids. For example, we've already talked about 1001 Nights being made into a kids version but then you BET Disney will take it even farther. Also, if you watch Aladdin on Disney+ now, you get met with a warning that I've screenshotted and added below. At least the live-action Aladdin (2019) had better representation but it was also just kind of a bad movie in general #sorrynotsorry. If you want a good adaptation that's more fun, the broadway musical opened in 2014 and is still running!!
Now onto the quotes that I chose for my journal, you know what I'm supposed to be talking about. I chose a lot of quotes centered around wealth and how that influences the Sultan's view for example, "[The Sultan] did not even think to discover whether Aladdin's other qualities might make for a suitable son-in-law. The mere sight of such riches... persuaded him that Aladdin had every accomplishment one could wish for". The way that riches and wealth completely change the perspective of someone literally still exists now. At one point Aladdin talks about how deceitful the Maghrebi magician is, but look at him!!! He's flaunting wealth that isn't his and it's working to change people's opinion of him, like wow, talk about deceit.Â
I also wrote "What about Princess Badr al-Badur?" underneath because it seems like such a careless thing for the Sultan to do, to look at riches and not the personality of the man asking for your daughter's hand. I know this isn't an uncommon thing, but it still gets me every time.
For this journal, I chose the quote from page 100 that says "She is an ornament..." There were so many good quotes from this chapter so it was hard to center on one. You'll see the other contenders floating around on the bage in the background. I also added stickers of women everywhere and made it "pretty" to go with the theme of women being simply a decoration for men and their household.Â
The rest of the quote states, "She is an ornament, there to entertain the curious; as a result it only takes an imperious nature to combine with a taste for dissapation, and she will slip into a moral decline, move quickly from independence to licentiousness, and soon aroud the scorn and indignation of men, even though men are inclined through self-interest to tolerate the vices of youth on account of its attractions." Okay, wow. Long quote. However, this is precisely the reason why it was so hard to pick one. Zilia has gone on a rant in her letters to Aza about how the French treat their women for this whole letter (34) and the one before that. It's quite a powerful commentary on French society, which is interesting because during this time there would have been an emphasis on loving the country and saying nothing bad about it (thanks absolutism). The genius is that there's no way a French person would be able to read this from another French person and not think them a hypocrite. So the fact that this is posed as an outsider noticing things about French culture? If the French were worried about appearances to other countries, well they've got their outsider opinion now, and it's not pretty.Â
Typically, my commonplace journals focus on the plights of women, but in this case I couldn't help but look at the age that Equiano was kidnapped. This quote, "I was now more persuaded than ever, that I was in another world, and that every thing about me was magic" from page 758 really struck me. He was taken at such a young age, and the fact that he can distinctly remember how in awe he was at the world just really got to me for some reason. Like wow, he would have been 11. I was still believing in Santa at this age and going to my parents for everything. The fact that he can think that he was in a world of magic while these horrible things were happening made me so sad. I don't even have anything more to say because it's just so sad and no person ever deserved that. The children's narratives of this time will never not break my heart.Â
Journal Posts & Reflection
In this 300-500-word final reflection, you will consider what you’ve done (how did you organize it? What themes or issues emerged as the semester went on?), why you’ve done it (what makes it interesting), and what you might change, using your own commonplace book and online commentary as evidence. Additionally, you must return to one of the readings on commonplacing (Erasmus or Smyth) and incorporate some aspect of that reading into your reflection. Don’t forget to include specific examples from your actual commonplace practice (images of your book, for example). You will be graded on the quality of your response as well as the thoughtfulness, completeness, and creativity of the commonplace book.
I fell in love with my commonplace book throughout the year. Though I only used a small fraction of the pages throughout the course, I plan to keep going with it during other HUST classes or through other books that I've read. Creating a commonplace page for each book that I've read in 2025 has become a new goal for me. I read 85+ books throughout 2024, but I have a hard time remembering them all, using the commonplace journal is my solution to that. I also like the idea of being able to link other HUST courses, like those that we've read in other tandems, to more modern works that I read.Â
As Smith said in his 16 traits of commonplace culture, there should be a presence of many different genres of writing (rule #6) and a connection between the commonplace and improvement (rule #13). I think my journal is evidence of that. There were many different genres throughout the course, but as each reflection came and went, I felt like I got better at expressing how I felt on the matter while being able to take creative liberty with how I present it. I don't really like how I did the first few entries, I think they're plain and, frankly, uninspired. However, as I got more into commonplacing, I started being far more happy with the results. For example, my second Journal post on Erasmus was ugly, I am not proud of it. I still feel this way about some of the pages, but I'm not going to go back and change it, because like Smith said, there should be proof of improvement.Â
I chose to organize my journal according to the chronology of the course, not necessarily which texts came first, but the order in which we covered them in class. I kind of resent the idea that it should be organized according to themes (Smith's rule #5) because I don't like properly planning for that, it stresses me out. I like being able to flip through the order in which I read books because then that way you can more easily connect previous themes or ideas. I tended to use quote that related to women or other marginalized communities at the time, with 10 of 13 entries being related to those ideas.Â