Harvad Referencing
During one of our lessons, we had to learn Harvard referencing. This is a technique that is required to know for creating essay's. This is a must as it is a proper way of referencing someone's source online. This way of linking someone else's source shows everything from their name, to the date it was released and the title of the website.
Essay Feedback
In one of the lessons on Emerging Technologies, we all had to give feedback to our peer's. This was done to give everyone feedback on their essay and to help them to try tweaking it a little bit and improving it to boost their grade that little bit higher. Underneath was the feedback that i recieved from a student. They had to write down two positives and one negative to show what they thought about my essay and what could be improved for future help.
PEEL paragraphs
During this lesson we went over PEEL paragraphs. This task was to get us used to structuring paragraphs in the right order for the reader to have a better understanding. The first P is for Point which is just the point you are going to be talking about, the first E is for evidence which is the researching part to find a source that will back up your point. The second E is for explanation which is then where you will explain your point and the source to back up your reasoning and the L is for link which will be to link back up with the point to conclude it as a whole.
Should children be allowed to watch movies with high level of violence?
Below is my paragraph leading to that question.