The writing process for grade 5 students typically includes the following steps:
Prewriting:
Brainstorming: Students generate ideas for their writing. This can be done through activities like mind mapping, listing, free writing, or discussing with peers.
Researching: For certain assignments, students gather information from books, articles, or the internet to support their ideas.
Planning: Students organize their ideas and create an outline. They decide on the main points they want to cover and the order in which they will present them.
Drafting:
Writing the First Draft: Students begin to put their ideas into sentences and paragraphs, following their outline. The focus is on getting ideas down on paper without worrying too much about grammar, spelling, or punctuation.
Revising:
Improving Content and Structure: Students review their drafts to make improvements. This includes adding more details, rearranging content for better flow, clarifying ideas, and ensuring that their writing meets the assignment's objectives.
Peer Review: Students often share their work with classmates to get feedback. This helps them see their writing from a different perspective and identify areas for improvement.
Editing:
Correcting Grammar and Spelling: Students focus on fixing errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, and sentence structure. They may use tools like dictionaries, grammar checkers, and style guides.
Polishing Language: Students work on refining their word choice and sentence variety to make their writing more engaging and clear.
Publishing:
Final Copy: Students create a clean, final version of their writing. This may involve typing it up, adding illustrations, or creating a presentation.
Sharing: Students share their finished work with others. This could be through classroom displays, reading aloud, or submitting it for assessment.
Reflecting:
Self-Assessment: Students reflect on their writing process and the final product. They consider what they did well, what challenges they faced, and how they can improve in future writing tasks.
Setting Goals: Based on their reflections, students set goals for their next writing project to continue developing their skills.
These steps help students develop a structured approach to writing, encouraging them to think critically about their work and continually improve their skills.
Using a mnemonic can be a helpful way for students to remember the steps of the writing process. One popular mnemonic is "P.O.W.E.R." which stands for:
Prewrite
Organize
Write (or Draft)
Edit (or Revise)
Revise (or Rewrite, Edit)
Here's a breakdown of the mnemonic:
Pre-write: Brainstorming, researching, and planning.
Organize: Creating an outline to structure the writing.
Write: Drafting the initial version of the piece.
Edit: Correcting grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
Revise: Reviewing content and making improvements.
This video further explains the writing process.
Here's a fun rap song about The Writing Process.
There are four main reasons for writing: to inform, to entertain, to describe and to persuade. Whatever the purpose, there are some basic qualities that are in all good pieces of writing.
1. fresh and exciting ideas.
2. captivating introduction
3. vivid details
4. well-organized with a distinct beginning, middle and end.
5. keeps the audience in mind and answers any questions they may have.
6. writes in a voice that connects with the readers
7. interesting and advanced vocabulary that includes specific nouns and vivid adjectives.
8. uses transitional words to keep the piece flowing
9. different types of sentences with varying lengths
10. good grammar, spelling and punctuation. 11. neat and well presented.
There are four main types of writing.
They each serve a different purpose.
1. Narrative Writing – This type of
writing tells a story. It is mainly
written for entertainment. A
personal narrative tells a story
about you.
2. Descriptive Writing – Uses
figurative language and provides
sensory details about a person,
place, thing or idea so that a clear
picture is painted in the reader’s
mind.
3. Expository Writing – Provides
information, gives an explanation
or directions.
4. Persuasive/Opinion Writing -
This type of writing expresses how
the writer feels about a particular
subject and attempts to get others
to feel the same way.
Narrative Writing
Descriptive Writing
Expository Writing
Before writing there are several
prewriting steps to follow:
1. Generate ideas. Strategies that
can be utilized to help generate
ideas include: peer discussions,
brainstorming, grouping ideas that
are alike, conducting research in
textbooks or on the internet,
talking to people who might be
knowledgeable about the topic,
conducting a survey, making a list
etc.
2. Select the best ideas. Review
the ideas and then make a
selection based on those that are
most important, most interesting
and have information that is
readily available.
3. Refine ideas. Ask leading
questions that will give specific
details on which the writer can
elaborate: Who? What? When?
Where? Why? How?
Sequence is the order in which things
happen or should happen. Sequential
order is very important when one is
relaying a story, writing directions or
instructions for performing a particular
task and describing something.
Before Words: ‘formerly’ and ‘prior
to’
Words that Show First: ‘initially’
and ‘originally’
Words that Show Next: ‘shortly
after’ and ‘a few seconds later’
Words that Show Last: ‘to finish’
and ‘in conclusion’
Another way to put ideas in order is to
use space order particularly when
describing the location of something.
Space order tells about something from
top to bottom or from left to right or
vice versa.
Prepositions like ‘below’ and ‘beside’
relay specific images.
Compare and contrast order tells how things are alike at first and then how
they are different or vice versa. ‘As
well as’ and ‘likewise’ are words that
compare. ‘However’ and ‘on the other
hand’ contrast.
Sometimes transitional words help to
move from one idea to another.
Examples of these words are: ‘further’
and ‘in addition to’.
An essay is divided into several
paragraphs. A good paragraph has
a topic sentence that clearly states
the main idea. The other sentences
in the paragraph provide the details
that support that idea.
Good paragraphs also have
transitional words and phrases that
show clear relationships or
connections between ideas,
sentences or paragraphs. There are
three main types of transitions. They
are transitions of time, comparison
and contrast and transitions for
exemplifying.
Time: first, then, next, before, finally,
at last, later
Compare/Contrast: however, but,
although, like
Example: for example, namely, that
is, along with
The last sentence in a paragraph
should tie the supporting sentences
together. It is called the concluding sentence. A strong conclusion sums up the main idea of the paragraph. Narrative Writing – When telling a story, the topic sentence should indicate what the story will be about. The supporting details should all provide information related to that topic. Do not include un-related information. Example: My birthday party was a disaster. To begin with, all of my friends came late. Then, there were no candles for the cake and most important of all, no one bought presents. I just want this day to end. Descriptive Writing – The topic sentence should tell what is being described. The supporting details should provide vivid descriptions of that person, place, thing or animal. Example: The beach in Orange Creek, Cat Island is gorgeous! The water is crystal clear. At the right tide, white sand dunes can be seen poking out of the water. Among them you may find tiny crabs, shells and other treasures. The sunset gives it all a gorgeous orange glow. You
must visit this picturesque beach!
Expository Writing:
If your purpose is to inform your
reader, your supporting details
should be facts.
Example: The crawfish season in
The Bahamas is from 1st August to
31st March. It is important to
establish a crawfish season for
several reasons. First, it allows the
crawfish time to reproduce and for
the babies to grow. Secondly, it
ensures that we do not consume too
much crawfish which might cause
them to become extinct. Finally, it
also ensures that some crawfish are
there to perform their jobs of keeping
the reefs clean. If we follow these
rules, we can enjoy crawfish for a
long time.
Persuasive Writing: If the purpose
is to persuade, then the topic
sentence should clearly state the
opinion of the writer on a particular
topic and then have solid reasons in
the details to support that viewpoint. Example:
Keep your promises! Why is that
important you may ask? First, God
expects us to speak truth. When we
don’t, it disappoints Him. Secondly, it
also helps to build trust with our
parents and friends. If your parents
can’t trust you to keep your word,
then they may not allow you to do
certain things that you like or go
certain places with your friends.
Finally, you will earn the respect of
your teachers. Keeping promises is
one of the most important decisions
you will ever make.
The introduction of an essay is key as its function is to capture the attention of the readers, to draw them into the piece and to provide the topic sentence. There are many ways to begin a piece. The writer has to decide which one would be best for the type of writing and the topic.
Begin with action. Michael ran down the field with the long pole in his hands. He planted it in the ground and leaped into the air over the high bar and then flopped onto the bed.
Use onomatopoeia. Swish! The wind blew the curtains into the flowerpot and sent it crashing to the ground.
Use alliteration. Pitter, patter, pitter, patter went the rain on the windowsill.
Start with the end. Brandon opened his room door to find all of his books and toys scattered on the ground.
Begin with a quote. “A word to the wise is sufficient” echoed in my mind as I walked to the principal’s office.
Begin with a dialogue. “Ouch!” I screamed, as the nurse touched my arm. “Relax child, I have not even given you the needle as yet,” she laughed.
The conclusion of a writing piece brings everything to an end in a way that is satisfying for readers. A good writer does not have to “announce” that it is the “end” but should move the readers through the piece in such a way that they realize the piece is concluding.
There are several ways to conclude a piece of writing.
End with a quote or a proverb.
Because he obeyed his mother, Byron escaped the jaws of the angry dog. “A word to the wise is sufficient” indeed!
Restate the topic sentence from the introductory paragraph in a different way. If we follow these rules, we can enjoy crawfish for a long time.
Summarize the main points. Do not introduce new ideas. Remember to ask questions during class when you do not understand something, complete your homework, review your schoolwork daily and study hard for your exams so that you can be a successful student.
Provide your opinion. That is why I believe that the best response to someone who is being rude, is to be extra kind to that person.
State the lesson learned or moral of the story. After that hurricane I recognized the value of being prepared.
Give a challenge. Can you make someone’s life better in a big or small way? Do not wait, do it today!
Add a surprise. In the distance she saw a figure moving towards her. It was Dereck! She could not believe her eyes. Her prayers had been answered.
Voice refers to how much of the writer can be felt in a piece. Is the writer interested and passionate about what is being written?
The work of many famous authors can be recognized by their voice and writing style.
The writer’s voice comes through in the tone and mood of the piece.
Tone refers to the feeling that an author creates. Is the piece serious? Playful? angry? etc.
The mood is the feeling that the reader gets after reading the piece.
Is the reader happy? sad? fearful?
It is important that the tone matches the message that the writer is trying to send. If the subject is serious for example, the language should not be light or funny.
The viewpoint from which material is written affects the voice. Writing can be done from different perspectives. Be careful when writing that you do not move from one perspective to another.
First Person – This perspective uses pronouns like I, me, my, mine, and myself to tell the story. The story is only being told from one person’s perspective. Because it is personal, an easy connection can be made with the reader.
Second Person – This viewpoint uses pronouns like you and yours. The story is being told by someone who is looking on.
Third Person – He, she, it and they are used when writing from this perspective. When writing from this viewpoint, the writer is the person who is looking on. Readers get to experience the inner thoughts of the characters.
Personification – This is when the writing is done from the perspective of an animal or an object. This is accomplished by giving the animal or object human characteristics such as speaking or gesturing.
Poems can be enhanced with the use of similes and metaphors. A simile is a comparison using like or as. It compares two similar objects. A metaphor states that one thing is something else. The comparison is made without the use of like or as.
Colour Poem:
This is a poem that can be used to tell about the author’s favourite colour. Analogies, similes or list nouns which are (or remind you of) that colour may be used. Writers use their senses to tell what it looks like, sounds like etc.
Free Verse Poems: Free verse poems have no set pattern. Parts of it can be rhymed or unrhymed. These types of poems sound like natural speech.
Writers often use dialogue in their
narrative pieces to make them more
interesting. Quotation marks are
used to set apart the exact words of
the speaker from the rest of the
sentence. One of the quotation marks
appears at the beginning of what was
said and the other at the end. The
first word in a quote is capitalized.
Example:
“Should we wait?” I asked.
Commas are used to separate who is
speaking from what is being said.
Example:
“Ricky,” she shouted, “Look at that
lovely specimen on the rock.”
We drank the lemonade slowly, “That
was refreshing!” Jack exclaimed.
Quotation marks are used to identify
the title of a song or a piece of writing.
The first quotation mark goes at the
beginning of the title and the second
quotation mark at the end of the title.
Example: “March on Bahamaland” is the name
of our national anthem.
To increase the impact of their writing,
writers often use familiar quotes or
quotes from famous people to get the
attention of the reader. These quotes
are set off by commas. They begin
with a capital letter and quite often a
comma separates them from the rest
of the sentence.
Example:
“It is better to give than to receive,” is
advice that is worth following.
Narrative writing tells a story or part of a
story. Narrative writing can be seen in
short stories, biographies, essays,
autobiographies, poems, and plays. A
narrative essay should have an
introduction, body, and a conclusion. The
general characteristics of a narrative
include:
Characterization
Setting
Plot structure
o Introduction
o Development
o Conclusion
Characters are the people or animals in a
story. The protagonist is the word used to
describe the hero. The antagonist is the
villain in the story. Time should be spent
developing descriptions of major
characters. Use specific words to
describe some of their unique physical
characteristics as they relate to their face,
hair and body. Also give insight into their
character traits by detailing their actions
and using interesting words.
Examples:
Brave – bold, valiant
Hostile – aggressive, combative
Determined – persistent, driven
The setting is the time and place where
the story takes place. Use the senses to
tell what can be seen, heard, felt, tasted,
or smelled.
Provide evidence of the time of day. This
can be stated clearly in the piece.
Example: It was exactly 9:00 a.m. when
she opened the door to the office.
It can also be left up to the reader to infer
the time of day.
Example: The sun was directly overhead
as they began their walk to the sandy
beach.
In the body of the writing, time should be
taken to develop the plot. The plot tells
what the problem in the story is and how it
is resolved. This is the time to use action
and dialogue to provide information about
the characters. Sentences should be
linked using transitions.
The end of the story or conclusion wraps
everything up.
A descriptive essay is a group of
paragraphs that can describe a person,
place, event, or idea. The author uses
descriptive details, phrasing, and literary
devices to make the writing come alive
and make it easier for the reader to
visualize what the writer is describing.
A descriptive essay should have a
captivating introduction that provides the
reader with an overview of what the
essay will be about. The body of the
essay should provide specific details
about what is being described. The
writer should end with a concluding
thought about the thing, place or person
that was described.
There are several strategies that authors
use when writing descriptively. The
words that are used to describe, should
be carefully selected so that they convey
detailed images to the readers.
Show Me, Don’t Tell Me is a strategy
that author’s use. For example,
instead of saying that a building is old
and unkempt, author’s use words to show the condition.
Example:
Cobwebs hung over the ceiling
above the creaky stairs and on the
dusty windows that were peppered
with tiny holes.
Sensory details are words used to
appeal to the five senses.
Example: As I passed Mr. Sawyer’s
house, there they were… the
biggest, sweetest, darkest, purple
sea grapes in the world! They hung
in long, heavy clusters just over the
wooden fence. Like a magnet, I was
drawn to them. As I got closer to the
tree, I stepped on a few that had
fallen to the ground. A dark, purple
liquid oozed out of them causing a
strong, fruity scent to fill the air.
Literary Devices are also used as a
tool for making writing interesting.
There are several of them that can be
used.
o Similes are comparisons that use
like or as. Example: He ran as fast as a hungry cheetah.
o Metaphors are comparisons that
do not use like or as. Example:
David is a shining star in Science.
o Alliteration: Repeating the
beginning consonant sound in two
or more consecutive words.
Example: Sally sold several silver
Samsung phones on Saturday.
o Onomatopoeia- These are words
that are actual sounds.
Examples: Zoom, Oink, Urghh
etc.
o Hyperbole: This is an
exaggeration. It is over
emphasizing the truth or
stretching the truth. Example: I
am so hungry I can eat a
thousand hamburgers!
o Personification: Giving human
qualities to non-human things.
Example: After three rainy days,
the sun smiled on us.
Descriptive writing uses words to create a vivid picture in the reader’s mind. It helps the reader to imagine scenes, people, places, or things by appealing to the five senses.
Sensory Details
Describe what you see, hear, smell, taste, and feel. These details bring your writing to life!
Strong Adjectives and Verbs
Use adjectives to describe (e.g., "sparkling lake") and strong verbs for action (e.g., "whispered," "dashed").
Show, Don’t Tell
Instead of saying "It was a hot day," show it: "The sun blazed, and sweat trickled down my face."
Figurative Language
Use similes, metaphors, and personification to add creativity (e.g., "The wind sang through the trees").
An expository essay explains,
describes, and provides information
about a particular topic.
There are various kinds of patterns for
expositions:
Comparison and Contrast: The
writer contrasts the differences
between two subjects and compares
the similarities between those
subjects.
Description: The writer gives a
complete description of the topic
before explaining what the term or
topic means.
Sequence or Process: The process
essay refers to the steps involved in
completing something. Example: how
to make an apple pie.
Like the narrative essay, the
expository essay has a beginning,
middle and an end. In the beginning the writer will grab
the reader’s attention with an opening
hook (Ask a question, provide action,
sound, quotes etc.) The reader is
informed as to what will be explained
or what information will be provided.
In the middle the most important
details are provided on the topic. If
steps in a process are being
explained, words like first, next, then,
last, finally etc. should be used as a
guide to the steps.
In the end, the essay can be wrapped
up by stating the main idea in another
way, providing final thoughts, advice
etc.
There are many examples of
expository writing:
Flyers
Invitations
Encyclopaedia Entries
The Tribune/Nassau Guardian
newspaper articles
Commercials
Reports Reviews
Want Ads
Classroom handout
Invitations are requests that are used to ask someone to attend a particular event. Examples of events include a birthday party, wedding, graduation, etc. When composing an invitation, include the following: Name of invited person Name of the event Purpose or description of the event Host(s) of the event Date and Time Location Directions (if necessary) Special instructions such as Dress Code (optional) RSVP details: Include deadline by which to respond and contact information.
An invitation is a special message that invites someone to an event or celebration. It provides important details about the occasion, such as the date, time, location, and purpose of the event. Invitations can be written for many different occasions, such as birthday parties, weddings, graduations, and school events. They can be formal or informal, depending on the type of event and the people being invited.
A good invitation should include key information. First, it should state who is hosting the event. This helps the guest know who the invitation is from. Next, the invitation should include what the event is about, such as a birthday party or a holiday gathering. It should also mention when the event will take place, giving the exact date and time. The where is also important because it tells guests the location of the event. Finally, an invitation should include how the guest should respond. Some invitations have an RSVP (Répondez s’il vous plaît), which means the host wants to know if the guest will attend. This helps with planning, such as preparing food, seating, or activities.
Invitations should be polite and welcoming. If the invitation is formal, it should use respectful language, such as “You are cordially invited to attend…” For informal invitations, the wording can be fun and friendly, such as “Come join us for a day of fun!” The design of the invitation can also reflect the theme of the event, using colors, pictures, or decorations to make it more exciting. Whether written on paper or sent digitally, invitations play an important role in making events special and well-organized.
Friendly letters are written to our family and friends. The purpose of a friendly letter is to share a message with persons with whom we are familiar. Friendly letters should include the following: The heading - This includes the address of the sender and the date. It is normally written in the right-hand corner at the top of the page. Salutation or Greeting - This is the way to identify to whom the letter is being written. It usually begins with “Dear” A comma follows the name of the person. The Body of the Letter – This is considered the main part of the letter. Include all the interesting details about family and friends and write about what you have been doing, your hobbies etc. You should indent the first sentence in each paragraph. The Closing – This is a way of ending the letter or signing off. “Love” and “Your best friend” are examples that are used. The first word in the closing is always capitalized, and a comma is placed at
the end of the closing.
Signature – This identifies the
person who is writing the letter.
There are many ways in which a letter
can be sent to the recipient. Letters can
be posted using the Post Office, emailed,
faxed, or sent via WhatsApp.
If a letter is being sent the traditional way
using the post office, it will need to be
placed in an envelope. On the envelope
in the left-hand corner, should be the
mailing address of the person sending
the letter. If the person lives in The
Bahamas, the information should include
the name of the sender, the mailing box
number and the island and country.
Example:
Ms. Karen Green
P.O. Box CB 11234
Nassau, Bahamas.
The address of the person who is to
receive the letter is placed in the middle
section of the envelope.
A friendly letter is a letter you write to someone you know, like a friend or family member. It has five important parts that help organize your message clearly.
1. Heading 📝
The heading is at the top of the letter. It includes the date and sometimes the sender’s address (if needed). The date tells the reader when the letter was written.
Example:
Sugar Apple Street
Nassau, Bahamas
P.O.Box N242
January 10, 2025
2. Greeting (Salutation) 👋
The greeting is how you say hello to the person you’re writing to. It usually starts with Dear followed by the person’s name and a comma.
Example:
Dear Grandma,
3. Body ✍️
This is the main part of the letter where you write your message. It can have one or more paragraphs depending on what you want to say. You can start by asking how the person is doing, share some news, tell a story, or ask questions.
Example:
How are you? I hope you are doing well! I wanted to tell you about my trip to the beach last weekend. It was so much fun!
4. Closing 💌
The closing is how you end the letter. Common closings are Sincerely, Your Friend, Love, Best Wishes, or Take Care, followed by a comma.
Example:
Your Friend,
5. Signature ✏️
This is where you sign your name at the bottom of the letter. If you are writing to someone very close to you, you might even add a small note or drawing!
Example:
Emily
Now that you know the parts of a friendly letter, you can write one to someone special! 😊
An opinion expresses a thought or
feeling about a particular thing.
Persuasive writing is a type of opinion
writing, as it provides the author’s
views on a particular topic. The essay
should have an introduction, a body,
and a conclusion.
Introductory Paragraph:
Begin the persuasive essay with an
introductory statement that captures
the attention of the readers. Begin with
a startling statement, a question, a
metaphor or a simile.
Examples:
Did you know that The Family
Islands hold some of the best kept
secrets in The Bahamas?
The broken glass in the road was
as treacherous for the car’s tyres as
a trap filled with cheese for a
mouse.
The introductory paragraph should also
have a topic sentence that indicates
the writer’s opinion on the topic and
mention the supporting reasons that will be discussed in the paragraphs
that follow.
The Body of the Essay: This is where
the writer develops the reasons to
support his/her opinions. Each
paragraph in the body should represent
one of those reasons with supporting
evidence.
Writers normally present their reasons
in order of importance. They begin
with the most important reason to
support their opinion and then present
the others in descending order.
Several persuasive techniques can be
used to develop the body of the
persuasive essay.
Using Facts: Using information that is
true to strengthen your position and
explanations.
Example:
“Earth is considered the most valuable
planet in the solar system. Billions of
people live on Earth using its resources
like oxygen, water and food sources.
Therefore, I agree...”
Generalizations: Using phrases to describe something that is accepted by
all.
Example: ‘all of my friends, ‘the entire
team’, ‘nobody in grade five’ etc.
Superlatives: Using phrases to
describe the highest quality of
something.
Example: 'the greatest’, ‘the most’, ‘the
best’ etc.
Data: Writing with numbers,
percentages, fractions, and quantities
to make your explanations appear
more believable.
Example:
Do you know that New Providence
uses 11 million gallons of ground water
per day?
Appealing to the Emotions: Using
phrases that pull on the emotions to
convince
Example: “I am your only child,” “You
love me,” “Don’t you want me to be
happy?”
What is your name?
What grade are you in?
Why do you want to be Head Girl / Head Boy?
What are some good things people say about you?
Are you helpful, respectful, kind, or honest? Give examples.
How do you show leadership at school or in class?
What makes The Remnant MiniVersity & Academy special?
What are your favorite things about the school?
Why are you proud to be a student here?
What ideas do you have to help the students or school?
How would you make the school better?
How would you help solve problems or support others?
What do you think makes a good leader?
How would you set a good example for others?
What would you say or do to encourage your classmates?
What makes you the best person for the job?
How will you make students proud of their choice?
Do you want to thank your teachers or classmates?
Do you have a quote, slogan, or saying that represents you?
What is one final reason you hope they’ll vote for you?