A discourse marker is a word or phrase that changes the flow or structure of dialogue without changing the meaning behind it. When making an argument in writing, the proper use of discourse markers can improve the transitions, effectiveness, and comprehensibility of the argument. Discourse markers are usually added to the beginning of a clause in order to establish a relationship between different ideas (Warwick, np). Although they are often placed at the beginning of a sentence, they may also be placed after a semicolon connecting two clauses (Warwick, np). Discourse markers are an essential piece of argumentative writing, and it is difficult to make a succinct point without an understanding of their use and benefits.
Discourse markers serve the purpose of engaging the audience and structuring an argument. Discourse markers allow an argument to be constructed logically and have clear connections between different sentences and paragraphs (Warwick, np). Also, discourse markers provide a steady flow between sentences so that the audience is not overwhelmed with standalone statements. Discourse markers are usually placed at the beginning of a phrase or clause and provide context for the relationship it has with the previous phrase or clause (Warwick, np).
First, discourse markers can compare or contrast (Pullum, np). For example, an author may write “On the one hand, fast food is generally unhealthy, and if consumption is not kept at a minimum, negative health conditions may arise. On the other hand, fast food provides a cheap and fast meal for busy people who would otherwise miss meals.”. By starting the first clause with “On the one hand”, the author signifies that they will compare two sides of an argument and describe one side in the first sentence. By starting the second clause with “On the other hand”, the author signifies that the other side of the argument is being presented and they are done describing the first side. As a result, the author provides a better visualization of their argument by having their audience separate the two sides into two hands. Additionally, this gives the author more credibility because the comparative claims are presented in an even manner. Utilizing discourse markers is an effective strategy for making comparative claims.
Second, discourse markers can provide a logical sequence (Detwiler, np). Another example of discourse markers would be if an author wanted to structure sentences in a paragraph or paragraphs in an essay in order of importance or sequence. For example, an author may write “First, the pan must be heated. Second, butter must be placed on the pan and melted so that it may act as a lubricant. Third, the egg must be cracked and emptied into the pan with care to avoid yolk breakage. Fourth, the egg must be flipped to cook the other side. Finally, the egg must be delicately removed and seasoned.” The author uses the discourse markers “First…Second…Third…Fourth” to chronologically structure their sentences, since any other order would be illogical. Thus, the audience understands that if they wish to cook an egg, they must follow the provided sequence. Moreover, the author utilizes “Finally” in their last sentence so that the audience understands that they are describing the final step and concluding the sequence. Another example would be this section detailing the importance of discourse markers. Although neither paragraph has more importance than the other, they are divided into "First...Second...Third" to help the audience better understand the situations in which discourse markers can be used. Discourse markers are critical in structuring sentences and paragraphs to follow a logical sequence.
Third, discourse markers can illustrate cause and effect (Detwiler, np). For example, an author may claim, “The police are equipped with the power to severely injure and kill people, and there will continue to be cases of law enforcement officers abusing their power if they are left unchecked. Therefore, body cameras should be mandatory for all law enforcement officers and any attempt to deactivate them should be considered a violation of the law.”. The author demonstrates what the current situation is or a trend that may result in an unfavorable outcome in their first sentence. By beginning their final sentence with “Therefore,” they convince the audience that, because the prior statement is the status quo, the claim in the final sentence must be considered. Without utilizing "Therefore", the two sentences would appear to be two separate statements and would lack a smooth transition, making what is written sound robotic and less sensical. Therefore, using discourse markers that illustrate cause and effect contributes to a more comprehensible essay.
Discourse markers serve a wide variety of purposes in structuring and connecting clauses, sentences, and paragraphs. They can add, show cause and effect, show sequencing, compare, contrast, give an example, emphasize, generalize, and more (Warwick, np). Utilizing discourse markers enhances the structure of a paragraph or paper, which allows the audience to better understand the presented material. In addition, discourse markers provide clear markers on how each piece of the essay is connected to each other. Thus, students would be wise to include discourse markers in their works and utilize them effectively.
Due to the abundance of discourse markers in the English language, there are also a variety of incorrect uses that writers unknowingly undergo. Awareness of commonly made errors allows writers to use the most effective discourse markers and quickly identify and avoid future mistakes.
A simple mistake many experienced writers make is disregarding parallelism when utilizing discourse markers. To maintain parallelism, the writer must use grammatically and structurally similar phrases to express related ideas (Writing 101 np). For example, many articles often contain the phrase "on the other hand" without including "on one hand" prior. The two terms do not work independently because of inconsistency and informality (Vocabulary Tips np). Similarly, writers should also avoid using the phrases such as "firstly" or "first of all" without including the complementary terms "secondly" or "third of all" afterward. Failing to use parallelism successfully will confuse the reader and diminish the writer's credibility.
Specific discourse markers are incredibly versatile and used in multiple situations. However, these commonly used discourse markers should not constantly repeat throughout a piece of writing. Various discourse markers have the same general meaning and prevent writers from sounding repetitive. For instance, the phrase "for example" is a standard discourse marker used to illustrate examples in writing. Although the phrase is effective, the writer will sound robotic if used excessively. Alternatives including "for instance" or "such as" helps a piece of writing flow naturally. Other phrases, such as "in conclusion" or "yet," are discourse markers that are not only used too much but should be avoided. Alternatives include "overall" or "although." By expanding to unfamiliar discourse markers, writers can engage the reader while giving their writing structure.
Unappealing discourse markers
For example
In conclusion
Yet
In the same way
On the other hand
As long as
Due to the fact that
Alternative discourse markers
For instance
Overall
Furthermore
Alternatively
Likewise
Regarding
Although utilizing a variety of discourse markers generally benefits writing, certain words and phrases must not be used in English 147 or any technical writing. Wordy and informal discourse markers should be avoided because they distract attention from the main topic and become an overuse of pretentious words. The types of discourse markers a writer chooses should be short, direct, and concise to convey information to the reader efficiently and effectively. An example of a wordy discourse marker is the phrase "due to the fact that." This phrase is five words long and sets up the word "it" later in the sentence. The phrase is more straightforward if simplified to "due to" or replaced with the word "since." Informal discourse markers usually appear in a normal spoken conversation, such as "truth be told" or "for a start." Instead of replacing these discourse markers with formal ones, the phrases do not provide anything valuable to the writing and can be deleted altogether. Avoiding redundant discourse markers helps writers keep their writing to the point and enhance credibility by demonstrating the ability to convey information concisely.
In writing, the experience and knowledge of the usage of discourse markers can be differentiators between the quality of arguments being made. When constructing an effective argument discourse markers provide a highly effective and grammatically correct method of transitioning between points within the argument. There is not a more effective way to format and create an effective argument within a paragraph without the effective use of discourse markers. A 2023 study titled “The use of discourse markers in argumentative compositions by Jordanian EFL learners” by Anas Huneety and others analyzed the use of discourse markers through people who were currently learning English as a foreign language. “The importance of exploring [discourse markers] lies in the fact that they aid discourse cohesion and coherence-they serve as cohesive devices that mark underlying connections between propositions” (Huneety et al. 2). Unlike new English learners, the use of discourse markers like that being discussed in the study is largely unconscious for those who are English speakers as their first language. The unfamiliarity with the purpose of discourse markers can lead to an ineffective or improper utilization of discourse markers for those largely unaccustomed to them. For new or learning writers, having a comprehensive understanding of the usage of discourse markers is a vital skill that all writers attempting to make an argument need to be proficient at.
The direct benefits of discourse markers become more evident when comparing their impact to when they are absent from a sentence or argument. Bruce Frasier’s 1988 study “Types of English Discourse Markers” evaluates the different discourse markers commonly used in the English language and their functions and effectiveness. “The absence of the Discourse Marker does not render a sentence ungrammatical and/or unintelligible. It does, however, remove a powerful clue about what commitment the speaker makes regarding the relationship between the current utterance and the prior discourse” (Frasier 22). When an author is proficient in writing with discourse markers an argument will increase in clarity, even though the sentence may have been grammatically correct before the implementation of discourse markers, the effectiveness and ease of comprehension for readers has been found to be positively changed as a result. Discourse markers are natural transitions that writers are largely familiar with, and their inclusion in arguments make it typically more understandable for readers. The familiarity allows the writer making the argument to have a direct message being communicated to their audience, without the chances of misinterpretation or conflicts and biases appearing due to the makeup of the argument being made.
Discourse markers hold an irreplaceable position in the fundamentals of argumentative writing that are taught and practiced today. As students and writers progress through different stages of their writing abilities, the number of discourse markers used, and by extension, the quality of their writing, increases with experience and practice. "The frequency of [discourse markers] can be, to some extent, a potential predictor/indicator of writing quality, that is, the higher the number of [discourse markers], the better the quality of writing" (Huneety et al. 7). The commonly found conclusion is that the furthering of one's knowledge and use of discourse markers in their writing will make the writing produced as a result much more effective, direct, and professional.
Created by Izik Hingeley, Josh DeWeese, and Charlie Wiltsee
Winter 2023 ENGL-147 Students