Birdshooting Season
by Olive Senior
Birdshooting season the men
make marriages with their guns
My father's house turns macho
as from far the hunter gather
All night long contentless women
stir their brews: hot coffee
chocolata, cerassie
wrap pone and tie-leaf
for tomorrow's sport. Tonight
the men drink white rum neat.
In darkness shouldering
their packs, their guns, they leave
We stand quietly on the
doorstep shivering. Little boys
longing to grow up birdhunters too
Little girls whispering:
Fly Birds Fly
Activity
What is the poem about?
Who is the speaker in the poem?
Identify all literary devices in the poem and comment on their effectiveness and use in the poem.
Identify the theme of the poem
Identify any important words or phrases in the poem and comment on their meaning
What is the mood of the poem?
What is the tone of the poem?
Questions
What does the line 'men make marriages with their guns' mean or imply?
What does the poem tell the reader about how men treat birdshooting season?
Compare how the men prepare for birdshooting season to the way the women prepare for birdshooting season, in detail, using lines from the poem to support your answer.
How does preparation for birdshooting season impact or influence the little boys, versus the little girls?
SUMMARY
As the poem’s title suggests the poem “Birdshooting Season” shows the rituals surround bird shooting season and the happenings in a house when both men and women prepare for the season. The poem is narrated by what seems to be a child member of the household as he/she tells the happenings in preparation for the hunt, thus the poem is told as he/she reflects on the activities in his/her household, men getting ready to go shooting while the women are inside preparing to make the food and children watching.
STANZA ANALYSIS
Stanza 1
The poem starts by saying “ men make marriages with their guns” men use their guns to hunt and shoot birds this line shows the relationship the men have with their guns, almost as if the guns are replacing the women. As more and more men gather at the house the narrator describes the house as getting more “macho” manlier emphasizing the definition of the poem of men as the strong primal hunters in contrast to its portrayal of women.
Stanza 2
Transitions to what the women of the house are doing in contrast to the men, who are going out shooting the women are inside doing more domestic tasks to show the stark difference between the roles of men and women. “All night contentless women stir there brews…” the word contentless here could mean that these women here are docile and obedient doing the cooking as the strong men go out to kill, or contentless as in women are dissatisfied with the role of having to cook for tomorrow’s “sport” while the men drink hard white rum and enjoy themselves. Women in the poem are shown doing the traditional domestic tasks in short women in the kitchen.
Stanza 3
The briefness of this stanza gives a sense of quickness, suspense and emphasizes the movement and motions “in darkness shouldering their packs, their guns, they leave” this leaves the reader to wonder what comes next.
Stanza 4
This stanza continues with the feeling of suspense and again shows the contrast between male and females and the role expected of them “little boys longing to grow up bird shooters too” this represents the role that the boys are expected to take up while the lines “little girls whispering: Fly Birds Fly” show the emotions that are associated with the females, empathy, and softness. The last line “Fly Bird Fly” with each letter in each word capitalized emphasizing the words, this leaves the reader wondering and left in suspense and speculation on what is to happen in the hunt.
LITERARY DEVICES
Metaphor
Examples: “Men make marriages to their guns” not literal marriage but shows the close, needed, and the relation the men had with their guns now that it is bird shooting season, you need your gun to shoot so the gun was held in high importance.
Imagery
Examples: “in darkness shouldering their packs, their guns they leave” we can imagine the scene of the men cloaked in darkness with guns in had and there sacks on their back leaving in the night to go hunt.
“We stand quietly on the doorstep shivering” again another image where we can picture the young children standing feeling the cold air, shivering as they watch the men leave.
THEMES
Gender roles
Children’s curiosity
Childhood experiences
Nature