Editing, Leadership and Team Building

Leadership and Team Building

I have always taken on the role of the editor, helper, and reader while being a member of Na Pueo. When I took on the more formal role of Opinion Editor, and then Editor-in-Chief, I made sure to always check in on my staff members and communicate with my fellow editors not only about the status of their section and which stories would go to print, but how they were handling their own revisions.

Being a team player is the most important part of a journalists work. As I check in on staff writers and editors, I make sure they know they always have a welcome friend in me, building those relationships on a foundation of trust and respect. This not only helps students feel comfortable in a classroom setting, but allows everyone to feel secure when receiving constructive criticism and tackling difficult subjects. I also ensure my team of editors is close, as we regularly text and call each other about the things we're struggling with or enjoying. This builds a supportive and lasting foundation which upholds our whole staff.

Making resources

This is one of multiple informational sheets and resources I have made for our staff. After the first issue of Fall Semester 2023, we experienced a lot of difficulties as the amount of first year journalists heavily outweighed the number of returning journalists. To address these changes, I created a comprehensive plan which would help our first years get caught up in the areas we decided were most pressing. 

Teacher and student's statements

"In the almost three years that I’ve known Pili, she has grown and helped others grow immeasurably. From being a staff writer, Opinion editor, to two-time Editor in Chief, Pili has not only strengthened her own writing ability, but led others to become better as well. Personally, I went from being a nervous freshman to now trusting and believing in myself because Pili trusts and believes in me. She holds so much understanding and grace for those around her, but pushes us all to perform as well as we can. I truly look up to Pili for her leadership and ability to connect with those around her, inspiring them to achieve everything they can. Her passion and dedication to journalism is unique and cannot be found in most people, and her impact on our journalism staff will last continuously." - Katie Troske, third year journalist and Opinion Editor.

"Pili has always been our leader, she sets deadlines, organizes activities and helps us all to be the best journalists possible. She works tirelessly for every issue both within InDesign and with editing. She has taught me everything I know about InDesign and how to style a proper newspaper. She made sure I knew what I was doing and took time to show me the ins and outs of the program. It is only because of her that our paper has been as successful as it has been." - Emi Lew, second year journalist and Design Editor. 

"Pili has been a member of the editorial staff of Mid-Pacific's literary magazine, Ka Nalu Ola for four years. From the outset, she dove into the collaborative process headfirst, and quickly emerged as an important voice on the staff. By the time she was a sophomore, her leadership qualities were evident. As an editor-in-chief the last two years, she has managed a staff of eight as well as coordinating dozens of contributors. She on-boards new editors, creates meeting agendas, and designs and leads editing and production tutorials. Some of her initiatives have included further digitizing the magazine, which has traditionally been a print publication, by moving layout and production to InDesign. She has worked to refine the editorial calendar in order to maximize efficiency. A tireless promoter of the publication, Pili has sought every opportunity to raise awareness of the magazine on campus, make connections on its behalf, and build a network of contributing writers and artists. Her presence has been invaluable." - Ken Baldino, Mid-Pacific English teacher and Advisor of the Literary Magazine.

Editing

Comment I made on a writer's work about a basketball player who recovered from a head injury.

Comment I left on a writer's work about the lunch makers at our school.

Comments I left on an article about the increase of online scams. 

Knowing how to edit a story is just as important as knowing how to write one. As an editor for multiple years, I've reviewed countless articles, checking for grammar and spelling mistakes, aiding the overall structure, and guiding the presentation of quotes and information. As I edit, I make sure I maintain my jovial, light personality and tone while offering constructive criticism and feedback that is comprehensive and helpful. This way, each writer understands that the feedback I offer is not because they are a "bad writer", only that there is always room for improvement, as I myself receive feedback from my fellow editors.

Picture of edits I made to a previously published work.
Vibe check: Examine your inner misogyny.

Editing an old story

Although I am very proud of this story, seeing where I have improved was such an enlightening experience. If I had written this article now, I would've gone about it in a completely different way. I would've organized my information differently, developed better transitions, and condensed my writing to be more succinct. However, as poet Ocean Vuong states, feeling uncomfortable by your previous work shows that you have improved, and the embarrassment I felt editing this in front of my peers is a testament to that. Although I would've changed all of this, I still really appreciate this article and what it means to me, and stand by it, as it shows how I've developed as a writer and journalist.