evaluation paragraph example

Here is a Non-Bumped up example...the one we worked on in class where YOU (the students) were the Teacher's Brain...

Title: Iron Woman

Author: Ted Hughes

I recommend the Iron Woman. So far this is a fun book to read that makes me want to keep turning pages. There are many scenes of action with an interesting twist on the environment, specifically, pollution. If you want a book, a unique book, I suggest you read Iron Woman.