THE TASK
Write a set of block comparative paragraphs (which will be two paragraphs) comparing the 60s Joker to the 2020 Joker based on what you observe from the video clips below.
THE CONTENT
Because the comparison is based on your observations from the video clips, there is no right or wrong answer. Just state what you find different about each Joker (their appearance, personality, speech, etc.) and support your opinion with examples from the clips.
HOW DO I BEGIN?
Make a topic sentence that lets the reader know what you are proving. A topic sentence like, "The old Joker and the new Joker are both similar and different" is way too vague. Even a sentence like "The old Joker and the modern Joker are quite different" is too general. Try starting with a sentence that is a bit more specific, like, "The modern Joker is much more sinister than the old Joker." (You can look at the ChatGPT paragraphs below as a starting point.)
YOUR AUDIENCE
One last thing to keep in mind is your readers. Your aim is to write this paragraph for a grade 8 English textbook. Keep the writing formal, however, your job is to make sure your sentences are clear and easy for 13 year-olds to understand.
ChatGPT VERSION
There are two problems with these AI generated paragraphs.
They are not written for a grade 8 audience. The language needs to be clearer, and the vocabulary needs to be simplified.
There are no examples to support the points. These paragraphs are all "telling" with no "showing."
You can start by using these paragraphs, but edit the sentences by deleting anything that is too complex for a grade 8 student, by changing the vocabulary, and adding specific examples from the video clips. Its up to you whether you use the same points in the paragraphs below or make your own points:
GPT Chat Paragraphs
CRITERIA
Vocabulary appropriate for an intelligent grade 8 audience.
A topic sentence that introduces both sides of the comparison
A concluding sentence that closes both sides of the comparison
Two separate paragraphs, each focusing on one side of the comparison (or one version of the Joker)
A subtle transition at the beginning of the second paragraph
At least three points on each side
Double space
Add a title
Use the MLA format
VIDEO CLIPS
The 60's Joker, based on the TV series Batman
The 2000s Joker, based on the movie, The Dark Night