Sidra Aslam

Topic name

impact of oil shocks on production and prices in Pakistan.

supervisor:

Dr Abdul Rasheed

assigmnent 5: part 1

Following are specif comments on my introduction by Dr asad zaman in order to make us clear that how to write introduction properly

Specific Comments:

• · Topic is viable and worthwhile.

• · Starting sentence is good to show importance.

• · Avoid including irrelevant and inapt literature.

• · Exclude energy from your variables because oil is itself an energy so no specific findings will be accomplished

• · Don’t need to tell that you are going to see negative and positive effects,they will automatically explored when statistically measured.

• Keep the literature on its exact place