Hina Ashfaq

Degree program: MS-IBF

Roll number: 52-SE/MS-IBF/F12

Area of research: Islamic finance

Proposed supervisor: Dr. Abdul Rasheed

Critique:

• I citied UNDP Pakistan’s report about poverty but didn’t mentioned the year, so Dr. Asad said whenever cite any report perhaps any figures then always mention the year because such figures changes from time to time.

• Do not express your own ideas.

• Try to establish the gap properly. If you are saying that this work has not been done before in Pakistan then mention what work has been done elsewhere.

• Importance and significance should be compatible to each other. if am saying in the start that microfinance maybe helpful to alleviate poverty, then in significance part do not say that if Islamic banks introduce MF product then it will help them to increase its market share.