Rabia BIbi
MS Economics & Finance
Registration # (101-FE/MS(EF-2)F-12)
topic: "effectiveness of fiscal and monetry policy"
My topic was “top income share and budget deficit”. Dr Asad Zaman’s comments are as follow:
Topic is good and could be researched but due to data constrain and supervisor constrained it is not possible to research upon it. Data on income inequality is not available. Very few figures on income inequality are available. Data on direct taxes would also not available. So need to discuss with advisor.
Here are few points I learnt from introduction that should be kept in mind in writing introduction:
Select a topic related to Pakistan specifically or study must have relevance with developing countries.
Topic must be discussed with supervisor.
In selecting topic must see that data is available on variable or not.
In writing introduction avoid material unrelated to your topic
Write introduction as short as possible and try to write related things only.
Avoid plagrism in writing introduction and give reference of each and every sentence taken from of read from another source.
First try to not quote the words of others and if quoted than put it in inverted commas and at the end of sentence give reference.
Everything what you write in introduction must also be understood. The things that you did not understand avoid writing in introduction.
Explain what you are going to do in research and write complete plane of study.
Define objective and significance of study that you are going to do. Also explain what benefit and importance of study.
Form hypothesis upon which you are going to search.
You should have a clear knowledge of your topic.
Read maximum articles related to your study it would enhance understanding of your topic and help in research.