Copy the following Peer Response form and paste it below your essay.
Peer Partner: ___________________
Using a different color, type your comments:
Does your partner introduce the essay well?
Does the thesis identify the most delusional in the family. What reason was given?
Did the essay make sense? Was it logical?
What was the problem about which your partner was writing?
Was the essay written well? Was it interesting to read or was it boring?
Was a variety of styles used for the citations? Or was the same style used over and over?
What suggestions do you have to "kick it up a notch"?
Did your partner's argument convincing? Did you to understand the reasoning? Do you think they are correct?
Was the essay written with passion?
Did the arguments make sense?
Was there a discussion for each character in the Loman family (Willy, Linda, Biff, Hap)? - At least a paragraph for each character.
Were there at least 3 citations from the text for each? How many for each?
Willy ____ Linda ____ Biff _____ Hap _____
Were the citations used appropriately?
Were the citations introduced properly and make sense?
Spelling errors?
Grammatical errors?
Does the essay appear to be at least 85% completed?