Peer Partner:
Intro.
- Does the introduction help the reader understand the topic of the paper? Explain.
- Does the introduction provide the reader with a framework to interpret the paper? Explain.
- Does the intro entice the reader to delve further into the paper? If so, how. If not, what suggestion do you have?
- Is the thesis clearly stated? Underline it in the paper.
- Does the thesis follow this format: "The students at El Segundo High School should/should not participate in the national Shut Down Your Screen Week because..."
- List the reasons why or why students and their families should participate in this shut off week. a) b) c)
Body. Copy and paste the answers to:
- Argument 1 topic sentence is
- Paste Concrete Detail #1:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- Paste Concrete Detail #2:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- does it support the thesis of the paper?
- Count the number of sentences for this body paragraph. Are there at least 7 sentences?
- Argument 2 topic sentence is
- Paste Concrete Detail #1:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- Paste Concrete Detail #2:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- does it support the thesis of the paper?
- Count the number of sentences for this body paragraph. Are there at least 7 sentences?
- Optional Argument 3 topic sentence is
- Paste Concrete Detail #1:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- Paste Concrete Detail #2:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
- does it support the thesis of the paper?
- Count the number of sentences for this body paragraph. Are there at least 7 sentences?
Counter Argument (Foil) topic sentence is
- Paste Counter Concrete Detail #1:
- are there 2 comments made for this concrete detail?
Conclusion.
Are the results of the paper reaffirmed by the conclusion?
Does the author mention/support the thesis?
Does the conclusion refer back to the intro?
Does conclusion offer a nice end to the paper?