Students Writing About Abstract Compositions
(Students were given the option to write a story or a poem.)
DAVIS, MAYWIN AND MASSAI
MAYWIN
ON THE TRAIN
The train drives everyday.
It goes throughout
the whole month of May.
There is a lot of rain
falling on the train.
THE FOREST
Every forest looks the same
but this forest looks like a game.
It's a different world in this place
but can you crack the case.
The forest is virtual reality
seeming to know your own personality.
The forest has mountain peaks
and a animal who always sneaks.
The grass is moving so fast
that they traveled into the past.
This forest is a great place
and look, I cracked the case.
MASSAI
COLORFUL BLUES
The colorful blues rules the blues
Blue is new to us
Blue is cool like the blues
Blue is smooth like the ocean
Blue finds all the clues
RED CLUES
Red is smooth like the blues
Can red be the golden clues
Red like Michael Jordan moves
Red is fast like the flash
Red is big like a rash.
THE AXE, ROLLER COASTER AND BIRD
DAVIS
The Axe was back
and the Roller Coaster started to yak-yak.
The Bird started to tweet
in a very good beat.
The Axe wanted to slice a tree
that had some bees.
The Roller Coaster was saying
you are playing.
The Bird went to the hive
and gave the bees a knife,
so when the Axe cuts first
you cut last.
The Axe was telling the Roller Coaster.
I am going to be a boaster
If I can cut the tree
and don't get stung by bees.
But the Axe did not know that
the bees would strike back
and nothing would top that
instead of being a slave
ending up in a grave.
CHASE
AND
ASAR
CHASE
THE HAUNTED HOUSE
Once in a village of darkness, 2 boys found a big giant house that was filled with color. The 2 boys had gone into the house with an invisible ghost following them. The 2 boys went inside and saw a big maze they had to go threw, so they went threw it. When they got out of the maze, they had to go threw an obstacle course of color which had hammers. The ground rumbled and shook but they got threw it quickly. When they past the obstacle course, the ghost found them! The 2 boys went to their plane and were never seen again.
THE GIANT DROP OF GOLD
Once there was a ship high above the sea with all kind of mateys and me. But they heard a noise in the cold and there was a Giant Drop of Gold. All the pirates went to there dens and gathered up the gold to become rich again.
ASAR
GREEN AND GOLD
Green and gold
makes you bold.
Blue and white
makes you feel
everything is right.
If your blue
it makes you feel new.
Grey and white
always has light.
A R T N O B O U N D A R I E S