Week 6

Room 7

Room 8

Room 22

Room 23

Room 24

Room 25

Change the way you start your sentences. Try one of these!

Thesaurus

Show! Don't tell!

1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.

Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. Destruction?

2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the BEGINNING of your story.

include a different sentence starter
FANBOYS sentence
AAAWWUBBIS sentence
This was it! The start of her adventure! (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)

1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.

Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. What feeling did you want to give your story?

2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the MIDDLE of your story.

include a different sentence starter
FANBOYS sentence
AAAWWUBBIS sentence
The Earth began to shatter... (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)

Words you could use:

1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.

Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. What feeling did you want to give your story?

2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the MIDDLE of your story.

include a different sentence starter
FANBOYS sentence
AAAWWUBBIS sentence
The crows gathered, the hunt was on. (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)

Teacher Model:

The clouds were grey. They were in the sky. The ship was broken.

Follow up: Have a go at improving this sentence

The hot air balloon went through the clouds. The parrot flew through the sky and landed on her hand.

Apostrophes for Contractions:

E.g. cannot = can’t I have = I’ve he will= he’ll she is= she’s we have= we’ve will not = won’t

Apostrophes for Possession

E.g. Alice’s heart Alice’s hair Alice’s face Alice’s arms