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Change the way you start your sentences. Try one of these!
Change the way you start your sentences. Try one of these!
Day 1: The Magical Umbrella
Day 1: The Magical Umbrella
WALT vary our sentences
WALT vary our sentences
1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.
Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. Is it dismal or ghastly?2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the BEGINNING of your story.
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
- include a different sentence starter
- FANBOYS sentence
- AAAWWUBBIS sentence
- Water began to puddle at her feet. (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)
Day 2: The Haunted House
Day 2: The Haunted House
WALT vary our sentences
WALT vary our sentences
1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.
Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. What feeling did you want to give your story?2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the MIDDLE of your story.
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
- include a different sentence starter
- FANBOYS sentence
- AAAWWUBBIS sentence
- It was then that she heard it… Whispers behind the door! (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)
Day 3: Underwater City
Day 3: Underwater City
WALT vary our sentences
WALT vary our sentences
1. What words could you use to describe this image? Add these to your plan.
Remember to think about the setting and the 'mood' of the picture. What feeling did you want to give your story?2. Write 1 paragraph about this picture. This will be the END of your story.
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
Challenge - include the following in your paragraph:
- include a different sentence starter
- FANBOYS sentence
- AAAWWUBBIS sentence
- The water was rising. Soon, everything would be underwater. (add these sentences to your paragraph and write in red)
Workshop Lesson
Workshop Lesson
Sick Sentences: Improve these sentences
Sick Sentences: Improve these sentences
Emily looked up at the cloud. Rain was coming down. She was sad.Workshop Lesson
Workshop Lesson
Sentence Challenge: Show, don't tell!
Sentence Challenge: Show, don't tell!
Instead of telling your readers, you can show them by describing.
It was cold outside.Follow up: Choose 1 sentence from your writing. Improve it by showing your readers by describing.
Workshop Lesson
Workshop Lesson
Sentence Challenge: Compound and Complex Sentences
Sentence Challenge: Compound and Complex Sentences
Can you use one of the following conjunctions to link your sentences: FANBOYS and AAAWWUBBIS
Emily was feeling extremely sad, soShe was angry that she had been left out, andBeing outside often cheered Emily up, yet
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