Chapter 1 Progress Points

Below: two "proto-drafts", a result of my evolving writing process, are examples of what happens in the late stage of my brainstorming sessions. These two specifically are testing potential beginnings for the first chapter.

Seen below is a more lenghty draft in which I primarily experimented with how I wanted to start my book after I figured out the setting for it with the protodrafts.

Below is a far more complete draft that meets my page goal of 5-10 pages a chapter. Created after figuring out how exactly the story is being told. This also serves as the final draft.