The World by Fatima A.
It is a very large circle,
It has very special and pleasant sounds,
Like those birds and more animals
There are many colors,
Like green in the gardens,
Blue in the ocean,
For us humans, it is very important,
We must take care of the world
Some animals are as soft as cotton,
The gardens have a sweet scent,
Sometimes it is very cold,
Sometimes it is very hot
When it is hot,
Many people enjoy the summer beaches,
When it is cold
You can enjoy skating on ice rinks
And this is the world,
IT has very interesting things,
IT is surrounded by humans,
Animals, gardens, water, nature.
Commentary
Mr. Brendan: This is great! Really great! What inspired you to write this?
Fatima: The interesting things that are in the world, I had no ideas how to make a poem, and I thought of the world the great things that are around us