Conventions of Composition Rule 216 Practice

1. Wrong: Sula really lives by her YOLO philosophy.

Better: Sula does whatever she wants without thinking about how her actions will affect others.

Explanation: YOLO is slang, and therefore not appropriate to a formal essay.

2. Wrong: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley have a total bromance.

Better: Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley spend many weeks together and get along well.

Explanation: Bromance, while funny, isn't the kind of language you should use in formal essays.

3.Wrong: Humbert should realize not to mess with jailbait.

Better: Humbert knows he shouldn't be attracted to the pre-teen Lolita.

Explanation: Jailbait isn't an appropriate word for a formal essay.