Writing Process: From Drafts to Revision

Focus: Don’t worry about perfection. The goal is to get your ideas on paper.

Tips:

• Write freely and quickly.

• Stick to your outline but allow new ideas to flow.

• Don't stop to edit or correct grammar.

Focus: Start shaping your argument more clearly.

Tips:

• Review your first draft for any off-topic sections.

• Make sure your thesis is clear and supported throughout.

• Begin organizing paragraphs logically.

Focus: Concentrate on the flow of your essay.

Tips:

• Ensure each paragraph transitions smoothly to the next.

• Check the topic sentences of each paragraph.

• Remove any redundant or irrelevant information.

Focus: Refine your writing for clarity, conciseness, and style.

Tips:

• Pay attention to word choice and sentence structure.

• Correct any grammatical errors and typos.

• Read aloud or have someone else review your work.

Clarity: Are your points clearly articulated? Is there any ambiguity?

Coherence: Do your arguments flow logically? Are there smooth transitions between paragraphs?

Consistency: Is your tense, point of view, and tone consistent throughout?

Conciseness: Have you eliminated unnecessary words or phrases?

Citations: Are all your sources correctly cited?

Take a Break: Step away from your essay before revising. It helps you see your work with fresh eyes.

Read Aloud: Reading aloud can help catch awkward phrasing and errors you might miss when reading silently.

Peer Review: Have a peer or mentor review your draft. They can provide valuable feedback.

Use Tools: Don’t hesitate to use grammar checkers, but don’t rely on them entirely.