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Persuasive Writing - Therapy Dogs In Class - aka Miss Frankie

As a class Room Two have been presented with a bit of a challenge when it comes to being allowed to have our Room Two Therapy Dog.  


It has come to my attention that a parent complained to Miss Smith and said 'The school has a sign stating dogs are not allowed on the school grounds.'   As a class we are going to write a persuasive argument as to why Frankie should be allowed to be 'our' class and school dog.

To write a convincing persuasive letter to Miss Smith, The Board of Trustees and wider community the writer needs to be concise, direct and factual.  We can also use our creative language devices to lull our readers in and persuade them to take our side!

To structure a great persuasive argument it is useful to follow 'AFOREST' format to structure your argument.


AFOREST-How to structure a great persuasive argument 







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Fairy Tales Term 4 2020


Writing a Fractured Fairy Tale
Blaketown Copy of Fractured FairyTales Library to Share

Cinderella Stories 

You must complete the  Cinderella Elements  and add it to the completed worksheet after we have listened to all the stories

Cinderella Stories

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Each Day you will read or listen to a Fairy Tale and a Fractured Fairy Tale. You will then need to fill in this Slide Show. 

While you are doing this think about what sort of Fairy Tale or Fractured Fairy Tale you are going to write.

Points to Consider

Fairy tales are written in the narrative genre:

Orientation (Introduction) 

Complication (problem) 

Resolution (solving the problem)

Coda (re-orientation) 

Traditional Fairy Tales also includes these conventions:

Happen in a vague time and place (Once upon a time, Deep in the forest, etc.)

Focus on the appearance of characters to reveal their true nature (Beauty = goodness)

Show powerful emotions such as jealousy, greed, love, hate and fearMay include magical creatures

Feature low-status females rescued by high-status males (Prince)Have a happy ending.


Pick a Path Stories

You are going to write and then present a speech. It needs to be 3 to 5 mins long. On the classroom wall you will see a solo rubric that will help you think about what you are doing.

Hamburger Speech
Fortnite writing (1)
AND THEN IT WENT DARK FINAL SLIDES

AND THEN IT WENT DARK

You will be given a partner to work with on this writing task. You must help and support each other to come up with 2 DIFFERENT Stories. There are lots of examples fo youto read but NOT COPY.

The Lighthouse

This activity has more than one task for you to work through. DO NOT write on the slide show.

The Lighthouse

LOST IN THE JUNGLE 

This task needs you think carefully before you begin and watc ALL the links.

Make sure you plan before you start  


Narrative Writing Task Lost in Th Jungle

Week Begining 25 May  (I realise this work may take 2 weeks)

Task 1   Complete the slide show on sentences. 

Task 2 Slide show you need to go on to write your Superhero narrative or newspaper report. 

Task 3 During the last couple of weeks of lockdown you were asked to design 10 questions and interview people ready to write a newspaper report.  You now need to write a newspaper report and present it as one (think about using something other than google for this)

REMEMBER TO EDIT ALL WORK BEFORE SHARING WITH ME TO  MARK IT. READ IT ALOUD TO YOURSELF AND GET SOMEONE ELSE TO READ IT FOR YOU

Newspaper Template
Writing Choices for 20 - 24 April
Digital Writing Prompts Photos

Do one task each day for the Digital Writing Slideshow

If you need a change from the  Digital Writing Prompts, try these.

SURFACE FEATURES

Surface Features are the features in writing that you notice straight away. Surface Features are the same in every type of writing, while  Surface Features are Grammar, Punctuation and Spelling. 

DEEPER FEATURES

Deep Features are different depending on the genre. There is a page for each type of genre - check them out if you are unsure how each one is set out.

Writing Goals 

Check where you are and what you have to do to move to the next level. If you want to see these in action check the exemplars in the writing genre you are working on.


Writing Goals.pdf

Grammar

Grammar is making sure you are using the English language correctly. When you check your work for Grammar mistakes, make sure the sentence makes sense, that there are no words missing and that words are used correctly. 


Sentence Types

Punctuation 

Punctuation is using the symbols associated with writing accurately. A comma is used to separate ideas that are still connected. A full stop is used to show the end of a sentence. Some other types of common punctuation are speech marks, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks, brackets, colons, and a lot more! 

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