Nick Beoglos
Presenting the Conversation Essay
3rd Quarter
Mrs. Koladin
Junior Year - Composition II - Investigate the World: Poses a specific researchable question on a local, regional, and/or global issue, and explains its significance to the global community
The artifact I chose to represent my investigation of the world as a Junior was my second essay for my composition II class. Prior to writing the essay, each student in our class chose a global issue to research for the semester, and I chose the issue of hunger. I chose the second essay I wrote on the topic of hunger, which relates to presenting the conversation. For this essay, we were tasked with exploring the topic of our global issue, finding both sides of the argument on the topic, and then presenting both sides equally in our second essay on the subject. The artifact matches the domain of investigating the world because I was tasked with researching and writing about my research in an unbiased manner on one of the world’s most pressing issues today. Specifically, my essay was about how issues of hunger should be solved, with two main sides arising in argumentation. In my paper, one side argued that more food production is necessary, while the other side argued that facilitation of food we already have is far more important. My essay represents a specific, researchable question that has an impact on a local, regional, and global level. Throughout the essay, I explained hunger’s global significance to the global population, how it affects people, and why it needs to be solved. The artifact demonstrates my proficiency in the domain of investigating the world because it shows my ability to conduct unbiased research on two sides of an argument/issue.
My creative process for this artifact was to learn as much information for both sides of the hunger debate that I could before even beginning to write my essay. I didn’t want to begin writing an essay thinking that there was an argument someone had made for one side of the debate, and then later finding out that the argument I had in mind didn’t exist. I had a general idea of the arguments I had in mind for both sides of the debate, looked up both sides with broad terms, then read most of the articles I found, even the ones I didn’t use to get a better grasp of the situation at hand. The content of the artifact was simple, being able to find as many articles, argumentative papers, etc.) to pick from for my paper so I had the quotes/evidence I needed to write a well thought out essay on both sides of the debate. The artifact changed how I think about essays because in prior essays, I would begin writing before I had collected evidence sometimes, hoping that the evidence I needed existed. This Artifact changed how I think about essay writing because I will always find evidence first, and then begin putting my thoughts to words in the essay. I developed the skill of analyzing and researching both sides of an argument from this paper. I can apply this skill to future essays even in this class, as hunger is my focus topic for the semester.
This artifact, and the work I did with it shows my growth as a globally competent citizen. Through this artifact, I am able to demonstrate my proficiency in analyzing both sides of a debate, and not simply jumping to conclusions. Jumping to simple assertions and assuming things without good evidence is a rampant issue in today’s society, and showing my ability to not do those things displays my growth as a global citizen. The essay also demonstrates my growth as a JAGS student because it not only displays more experience with essay writing, but more experience with international research as hunger is an international issue today.