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post: 6/5/2022 https://sites.google.com/asu.edu/raymond-sun-student-portfolio/home

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Step 2: Compose

First, select one of the samples you read to write about.

Next, compose a 3-4-paragraph discussion post in which you do the following:

• Paragraph 1: Identify at least one example from the sample profile where practical, specific details are incorporated. Explain why you find the examples you have chosen to be effective. Please use quotation marks to signal the particular words/sentences from the sample profile.

One example of the same profile with some specific details is Priscilla Chan. I found this example because of the emotion she faced seeing as a physician. "When Priscilla Chan began her residency as a pediatrician at San Francisco General Hospital, she warned her attending physician, "I want to tell you upfront: I am a crier." "And she did. "When she is feeling exhausted or overwhelmed, and sometimes when she is ecstatic, it's just one of her ways of expressing" (Safian 1). She was feeling stressed and overwhelmed about going to the hospital and expressed how she was having a negative emotional appeal of stress when visiting a hospital as a physician.

https://qz.com/1402697/the-amazing-ascent-of-priscilla-chan/

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• Paragraph 2:Identify one example where primary source information (such as interview excerpts) is used to enhance the profile for readers. Make sure to explain how this example is compelling for readers. Again, use quotation marks to signal the words/sentences you have used for this example.

One example of the primary source of this information is a journal about Priscilla Chan's time in san Francisco. This story was all about life and the fantastic accent of Priscilla and her own stories of being a physician in a hospital. "There was this horrific fire, multiple kids getting burned badly," recalls Ryan Padrez, the chief resident who oversaw Chan's pediatric trauma work at the hospital."(Safian 1) This example is practical for the readers because it shows how Priscilla chan is working as a physician to care for students who got burned when the fire broke out. This story that is effective for the reader is about what event is going on and how the event played out in this story.

• Discuss the key takeaways from these sample profiles for you. What have you learned from these sample profiles that will help you draft your profile? What techniques do you hope to employ in your profile draft? What techniques do you plan to avoid in your draft?

Paragraph 3: The key takeaway from this sample profile is about a journal by Priscilla Chan. I will employ the techniques in my draft with Brian Watkins as the public figure that I choose about the ca republican party. The techniques that I would avoid would be not missing any parts of the assignment and mentioning the rhetorical analysis in the essay. I have learned from this assignment about the real story behind it and how the main events from Priscilla Chan would I use in the story.

Five Public people are due May 19th, 2022

• Calfire Cheif : Mike Richwine

• CHP Cheif: Amanda L. Ray

• Brad Waller- elected leader

• Bill , select one of the samples you read to write about.

• Next, compose a 3-4-paragraph post in which you do the following:

• Paragraph 1: Identify at least one example from the sample profile where practical, specific details are incorporated. Explain why you find the examples you have chosen to be effective. Please use marks to signal the particular words/sentences from the sample profile.

• One of the same profile with some specific details is Priscilla Chan. I found this example because of she faced seeing as a physician. "When Priscilla Chan began her as a pediatrician at San Francisco General , she warned her attending physician, "I want to tell you upfront: I am a crier." "And she did. "When she is feeling exhausted or overwhelmed, and when she is , it's just one of her ways of expressing" (Safian 1). She was feeling stressed and overwhelmed about going to the public schools and finding ways to bring in new money and or save money such as new solar panels on the roof and renting out schools that were closed for soo long, to bring in new money for RBUSD.

Mike Richwine was the Calfire chief who saw the worst of California wildfires, during the 2020 fire season there were a lot of people in the forest, and how a fire in California can start so easily. Every year the State of California suffers from the worst fires and the worst drought, and fires are typically burned with ashes and smoke because some people in California were not prepared for evacuations and how each fire could start in just a second because when you touch some of the dry grass and the leaves, then the fire starts and it could start in any minute. So Calfire officials were urging their own residents to please be prepared for the worst wildfire season that is yet to come.

Every year California suffers the most wildfires and when the temperature gets hotter and hotter then the air and smoke go up and up. The forests in California wildfire seasons become so dry that they needed to cool down the dirt and the trees that will make it soo flammable means that fires could start at any minute and each year cal fire and its own crew start to put out the fires with water and every year firefighters in the state of California and in any department the fires are going up and up the smoke, it burns a lot of homes in the state of California and each year people have lost their homes like it was in a junkyard of all the smoke that burned through the state of California and other parts of the country. State officials think that climate change is the solution to solve the state's wildfire problem, but the real answer would be forest management.