Year Reflections for English 101

Sun, Raymond

Mcdonald Heater

English 101

16 May 2022

Reflection: Your Writing

My writing begins with me as the of this future book. Starting on my writing , I would like to write different types of essays and research assignments:

I want to share which writing prompts I would like to have.

I want to express how others will feel that I would be a good writer. I would say how I would like to be a writer myself and write some good in the future.

My writing journey begins with me as the of this future book.

Body paragraph

First, I would like to share what I want to identify and which writing prompts I would like. The first writing prompt that I would like to write about is "what type of writing would you like to have" (Mcdonald 1). This prompt stood out because I wanted to write about the California Way inside the Newsom Administration. It would stand out in any of my future essays, so when I am thinking about writing this prompt, when I write my book, I would reflect on the time that I had English 101 with Mrs. Mcdonald. Lastly, if I became a writer, I would write different after taking English 101 and 102.

Next, I would express how I would like to be a writer myself and write some good in the future. As I said earlier, I would like to publish my book called the California Way, and I may want to publish a children's book of the California Dream. I felt off when I wrote about my avengers and this COVID-19 . I would be writing my own into that I would show worldwide. Lastly, I would feel at home when I became a writer.

Then, I would like to express how others will feel that I would be a good writer. Others who want to say that I would be a good writer are writing some different types of topics such as research on social and medicare running out of money and other great topics such as the children's book about the California Dream. Third, I want others to know that I would be the best writer to research and report on that or write a book about social security running out of money. The fourth expression is that I always wanted to write my own stories and find a way for my own stories about the California Way to learn all about the California Dream. Lastly, I want others to know that I have been a good writer when I write stories about what is happening in today's world.

CONCLUSION

My writing journey begins today with me as the author of this future book:

1. I shared what writing prompts I wanted to use for this essay.

2. I expressed how I would like to be a writer myself and write some good books; then, I said how others feel that I would be a good writer.

3. I always strive to become a better writer than today, research and write different stories and improve my writing.

Five Public people are due May 19th, 2022

• Calfire Cheif : Mike Richwine

• CHP Cheif: Amanda L. Ray

• Brad Waller- elected leader

• Bill Brad- Redondo Beach

• Kacey Montoya - the owner of fix and fidos

3. Freewriting

The Goal of the rhetorical analysis is to persuade to give the audience on what policy that they want to change. The elements of the rhetorical analysis can be ethos, for example referring to the author, Kairos refers to a timeline of what has happing in California, and pathos the emotion of people leaving CA. The making off a rhetorical analysis is successful because it shows the emotions on how people were going to be leaving CA and the timeline of California wildfires. I do not have any questions or concerns about this genie.

I am confident that i can write about any public figure that I will present. The kinds of public figures that I am interested in writing about are political people, former US attorneys and many others in public service.

post: 6/5/2022

Profile: Priscilla Chan

Step 2: Compose

• , select one of the samples you read to write about.

• Next, compose a 3-4-paragraph discussion post in which you do the following:

• Identify at least one from the sample profile where practical, specific details are incorporated. Explain why you find the examples you have chosen to be effective. Please use marks to signal the particular words/sentences from the sample profile.

Paragraph 1: One example of the same profile with some specific details is Priscilla Chan. I found this example because of the emotion she faced seeing as a physician. "When Priscilla Chan began her residency as a pediatrician at San Francisco General Hospital, she warned her attending physican "I want to tell you upfront: I am a crier." "And she did". "When she is feeling exhausted or overwhelmed, and sometimes when she is ecstatic, it's just one of her ways of expressing" (Safian 1). She was feeling stressed and overwhelmed about going to the hospital and expressed how she was having a negative emotional appeal of stress when visiting a hospital as a physician. This also shows how she feel some emotion and overwhelmed at work and her own expression while this story was a journal about Priscilla job of working at the San Francisco General Hospital. Lastly, this was the life and the legecy of Priscilla when she began her own carrer as a phyican before married with mark zuckberg to own Facebook and how she got the

https://qz.com/1402697/the-amazing-ascent-of-priscilla-chan/

Identify one example where primary source information (such as interview excerpts) is used to enhance the profile for readers. Make sure to explain how this example is compelling for readers. Again, use quotation marks to signal the words/sentences you have used for this example.

Paragraph 2:One example of the primary source of this information is a journal about Priscilla Chan's time in san Francisco. This story was all about life and the fantastic accent of Priscilla and her own stories of being a physician in a hospital. "There was this horrific fire, multiple kids getting burned badly," recalls Ryan Padrez, the chief resident who oversaw Chan's pediatric trauma work at the hospital."(Safian 1) This example is practical for the readers because it shows how Priscilla chan is working as a physician to care for students who got burned when the fire broke out. This story that is effective for the reader is about what event is going on and how the event played out in Prisulla phyican before getting married to mark zuckeberg.

• Discuss the key takeaways from these sample profiles for you. What have you learned from these sample profiles that will help you draft your profile? What techniques do you hope to employ in your profile draft? What techniques do you plan to avoid in your draft?

Paragraph 3: The key takeaway from this sample profile is about a journal by Priscilla Chan. I will employ the techniques in my draft with Brian Watkins as the public figure that I choose about the ca republican party. The techniques that I would avoid would be not missing any parts of the assignment and mentioning the rhetorical analysis in the essay. I have learned from this assignment about the real story behind it and how the main events from Priscilla Chan would I use in the story. Lastly, I will use this assignment to understand while i am completing the interview with Bryan Watkins and doing my project 2 essay.