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This page contain my working progress for my Major Project 2: Nuclear Bomb Testing at Marshall Islands
This page contain my working progress for my Major Project 2: Nuclear Bomb Testing at Marshall Islands
Peer Review
Peer Review
This is a class peer review my classmate and I had a discussion about my strengths and weaknesses, I valued her feedback.
This is a class peer review my classmate and I had a discussion about my strengths and weaknesses, I valued her feedback.
Receiving feedbacks from my classmates helped me set up a revision plan for my final draft for essay 2.
In this essay, I will use Silverman and Rader’s (2018) framework of semiotics, lens, and microscopes and reliable source to support my claim that the poem, Anointed, is about awareness and truth of what became of these islands and it’s people focusing on Kathy Jetnil- Kijiner’s poem, Anointed, to say this was an island once before it became a tomb, it became a testing ground consumed by nuclear weapons and who anointed them with the power to burn it?
Revision Plan
Revision Plan
I had a one to one discussion with my professor in class of few ideas and changes I can make to better shape my essay for my readers to better understand the purpose of my writing.
Here I tweaked my thesis statement and include a reliable source to support my claim after receiving feedback from my professor.
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