This is my introduction and thesis statement draft explaining my essay about the power of language and communication. 

The purpose of this peer review is to help provide feedback about my introduction, body and organization if it meets expectations or if needs revision, what are my writing strengths and limitations.

Receiving feedbacks from my classmates helped me set up a revision plan for my final draft for essay 1.

" The Power of a Language" to communicate effectively, it is important to understand the power of language and cultural identities.

This is my self reflection assessment of how I overcame the challenges I experienced while developing my academic essay.