Poetry
Poetry Unit
In our class we are starting a unit on poetry. We are using Sharon Creech's book 'Love that Dog' as a focal point. The main character in the story is a fourth grader learning about poetry. Each day he reads a famous poem and writes his own version of the poem. We are going to copy him! Each day we will write our inspired poems and post them to our google sites. Below I will post the poems that we do each day and a few exemplars from our class.
Black Cat
by: Christopher Myers
black cat, black cat
cousin to the concrete
creeping down our city streets
where do you live, where will we meet?
sauntering like rainwater down storm drains
between Cadillac tires and the curb
sipping water from fire hydrants
dancing to the banging beats of passing jeeps
ducking under the red circling of sirens cutting
through the night
5.6.16
Love That Boy
BY WALTER DEAN MYERS
Love that boy,
like a rabbit loves to run
I said I love that boy
like a rabbit loves to run
Love to call him in the morning
love to call him
"Hey there, son!"
He walk like his Grandpa,
Grins like his Uncle Ben.
I said he walk like his Grandpa,
And grins like his Uncle Ben.
Grins when he’s happy,
When he sad, he grins again.
His mama like to hold him,
Like to feed him cherry pie.
I said his mama like to hold him.
Like to feed him that cherry pie.
She can have him now,
I’ll get him by and by
He got long roads to walk down
Before the setting sun.
I said he got a long, long road to walk down
Before the setting sun.
He’ll be a long stride walker,
And a good man before he done.
5/4/16
Today's poems will be published on paper. It will not be online. We are doing 'shape' poems.
5/3/16
Street Music
BY ARNOLD ADOFF
T h i s c i t y
t h e
a l w a y s
n o i s e
g r i n d i n g
up from the
s u b w a y s
u n d e r
g r o u n d:
slamming from bus tires
and taxi horns and engines
of cars and trucks in all
v o c a b u l a r i e s
of
clas
flash
screeching
hot metal l a n g u a g e
c o m b i n a t i o n s:
as p l a n e s
o v e r h e a d
r o a r
an
o r c h e s t r a
of rolling drums
and battle blasts
assaulting
my ears
w i t h
t h e
a l w a y s
n o i s e of
t h i s c i t y:
street music.
Mona
11:01 AM
T h i s h o u s e
A l w a y s
l o u d
g r i n d i n g
c h e e s e
o h
i t' s
s u c h
A
b o r e
Slamming doors here and there
everybody making noise
do you here the engines
cars trucks in all
V o c a b u l a r i e s
of
Bang
Crash
Screeching
sister's in a
different
l a n g u a g e
c o m b i n a t i o n s:
as I
s c r e a m
A b i g
plane
flies
overhead
a
marching
band
with
their
drums
This
house
is
loud
Joseph
10:57 AM
This trampoline
the
Always
noise
from
the
bouncing
v o c a b u l a r y
of
cling
clank
swoosh
yahoo
do a back flip
hot fabric of the net walls
c o m b a n a t i o n s
of tricks
backflip
360
twist
as
planes
roaring
Engine
booming
as it fly's by
hurting my ears
the noise of outside
inspired by street music
Alina
10:50 AM
T h i s c l a s s
t h e y
a l w a y s
n o i s e
y e l l, j u m p i n g, t a l k i n g l o u d l y
v o c a b u l a r i e s
y e l l
t a l k
c h a t t i n g
m o n a
l u c y
s h h ! ! ! !
Cristian
This house
the always
noise
angry brothers
wrestling
hurting each of them
v o c a b u l a r i e s
crying
going
to
mom and dad
he hit me first
mom and dad screams
makes them grounded
11:00 AM
5/2/16
The Pasture
BY ROBERT FROST
I'm going out to clean the pasture spring;
I'll only stop to rake the leaves away
(And wait to watch the water clear, I may):
I sha'n't be gone long.--You come too.
I'm going out to fetch the little calf
That's standing by the mother. It's so young,
It totters when she licks it with her tongue.
I sha'n't be gone long.--You come too.
Mason
I'm going out to clean Bases
Only stop to rake the back stop
For the lonely cop
Will you rake it too?
Going to get the ball
Rolling to the Master
The master is the Sportscaster
of B Ball
May 2
Brionna
I'm going out to play at my friend's house,
To make another Brionna and Jake Show.
And watch the show when it's shone, even though they all say no.
I WILL be gone long. --You come too.
I'm going outside to see if people are coming.
Oh look, one's coming now.
She's running, wow.
She's fast.
We retreat, into the house.
I WILL be gone long. --You come too.
May 2
Lingxiao May 2
The Outside
I'm going out to see the sunshine;
I'll go with my pink little bike
I want to go out that's what I like
I sha'n't be gone long.--You come too.
I'm going out to breathe the fresh air
I'll go out for a hike
I want to go out that's what I like
I sha'n't be gone long.--You come too
Mona
May 2
I'm going to Somalia this spring;
I'll only stop for the plane
My sister's are making me insane
I'm not going to be gone for long.- You come too
I'm going out to watch the clouds
Hey it looks like it's on the ground
Everyday I hear the beautiful sounds
Next time I go- You come too
Prija
May 2
Something that's green and brown
that I can climb
I wish there were limes
but it's still my
Favorite tree
4.29.15
Dog
by: Valeria Worth
Under a maple tree
The dog lies down,
Lolls his limp
Tongue, yawns,
Rests his long chin
Carefully between
Front paws;
Looks up, alert;
Chops, with heavy
Jaws, at a slow fly,
Blinks, rolls
On his side,
Sighs, closes
His eyes: sleeps
All afternoon
In his loose skin
Bobby Lin
10:33 AM
Little Birds
flying high eating worms
making nest with sticks
laying eggs in the
nest mother's taking care
of eggs as they
hatch then eggs hatch
mother feeds baby birds worms baby Birds grow
then learn to fly
kid Birds's help mother.
Cristian Kuhn
The Bear
Under a tree
is a bear
eating fish
licking his lips
until it's night
with a tummy
full of food
10:46 AM
Alina Kadariya
I wish, I wish
I had a kitten
That was white as snow
cute like puppy
Her eyes should be,
Blue as the Indian Ocean
That is what I want
10:28 AM
Isaiah Gulley
10:35 AM
Black dog
black dog
likes to fight
at Halloween
in the night
and it brings its candy
and its light
so that's why
he likes to fight
4.27.16
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Tyger Tyger, burning bright,
In the forests of the night;
What immortal hand or eye,
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
In what distant deeps or skies.
Burnt the fire of thine eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand, dare seize the fire?
And what shoulder, & what art,
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand? & what dread feet?
What the hammer? what the chain,
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? what dread grasp,
Dare its deadly terrors clasp!
When the stars threw down their spears
And water'd heaven with their tears:
Did he smile his work to see?
Did he who made the Lamb make thee?
Tyger Tyger burning bright,
In the forests of the night:
What immortal hand or eye,
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
Prija
Fyle Fyle miles of smiles
The halls are filled with
Friendly smiles
Patterns patterns in my brain
Driving me crazy and insane
Prija prija is my name
I’m shore I’m not the one to blame
Because l win the words games
Eric Patanella
10:55 AM
Shadow the Hedgehog speeding bright
in the darkness, of the night;
What immortal bike or fight,
Could explode this scary symmetry?
In what distant night or light.
Burnt the bombs, of his plight?
On what chaos dare he drive
what the bike, dare seize the fire?
And what arm, and what bike
could transform him to super shadow on the bike?
and when the heart began to beat
What dread bike? What dread feet?
What's the gun? In his hand,
In what furnace was a death band?
What the bike? what dread vroom
dare its deadly people lead them to doom.
When the bad guys threw their spears
and water that would make him die with tears:
Did he laugh his work too see?
Did he who made the god do thee?
Shadow the Hedgehog speeding bright
in the darkness, of the night;
What immortal bike or fight,
Could explode this scary symmetry?
4.26.16
Brionna's Robert Frost inspired poem
Brionna Dumais
Whose house this is I think I know
They live in this house though
They will not see me playing here
trying to climb the tree from the hammock
My brother must think it fun
to climb on the tree stumps
Between the road and house
The best day of the year
He gives a stick a shake
To say "I'm King"
The only other sound's the clang of pans
Of my grandma cooking
The yard is pretty, damp, and sunny.
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep
10:24 AM
Eric Patanella
Whose Mushroom kingdom I think I know.
Her castle in the kingdom, though;
They will not see me stopping here
To watch her kingdom filled with grass.
My little kart must think it's queer
To stop without a racetrack here
Between the castle and the cannon
The lightest day of the year.
He gives his engine a loud roar
To say "you forgot to close my door."
The only other sounds a boom
Of a loud canon making Mario soar.
The kingdoms lovely light and sweet,
But I have promises to keep,
And miles and miles before I sleep,
And miles and miles before I sleep.
10:27 AM
Isaiah Gulley
10:35 AM
My peaceful place is home
Where I lay down
watching tv
Then I go to sleep
I feel peaceful like a bird in the woods
I'd stay here forever if I could
but, I have jobs to do
and have to clean up before I go home
and have to clean up before I go home
Alina Kadariya
1:01 PM
The bed so lovely, warm, and cozy
I couldn't put my feet on the ground
like a silly old man
unable to wake up in the morning
Mona Mohamed
10:36 AM
My peaceful place is England I think I know
Flying smooth on a plane
Waiting for the landing
Here
I
go
The fair is bright
The fair is fun
The fair is light
I wish it was never done
Family is loving
Family is calm
Family is nice
Family is fun
England is lovely, cool, and awesome
But I have promises to keep
Miles to go before I leave
Miles to before I leave
Nathan Rogowski
My room is comfy, small, and neat
but I have responsibilities to keep
and school work to do before I sleep
and school work to do before I sleep
10:36 AM
4.25.16
The Red Wheelbarrow
William Carlos Williams, 1883 - 1963
so much depends upon a red wheel barrow glazed with rain water beside the white chickens.
Student work:
Nathan Blair
So much depends
upon
on a boy
that has no friends
Apr 25
Sean Bradshaw
Apr 25
so much depends
upon
a big gigantic
book
this book is
nice
and so is its
cover
Cristian Kuhn
so much depends
upon
a bear
with some berries
Apr 25
Joseph Pratt
Apr 25
So Much Depends
Upon
A small
computer
covered with
dust
In a classroom