Board Layout progression & Critiques

1 board spread

Self-evaluation: There's definitely a lot to improve on for the first board, there is no direct portraiture that shows who the person is yet and there are a lot of gap fillers that will need to be replaced later on. A few of the photos are irrelevant like the wing mirror photos and the charging cables.

2 board spread

Self-evaluation: I really like the colours and progression of the first board, there are some photos in the small row I would replace later on but for now it has some good groupings and there's a flow to it. The second board needs work and other ideas to lift it and match it to the first board. 

2 1/2 board spread

Self evaluation: The first board feels very meaningless to me, like it's very empty even though there are lots of photos on there. The second board is the opposite, it's very busy and there's a very disjointed flow to it. The last board is the best, it feels like there's a range of ideas but it fits well together. I feel like I really struggled to make this board flow and to lay out ideas, and its very obvious. 

3 board spread

Evaluation: I think a few things need reshuffling and editing, defintely the last line on board 2 needs to be made significantly smaller. It needs some adjustments here and there but it shows a lot of the key ideas of my theme. 

Final board for internal hand in