Fazbear Re-Writes Competition

What is Fazbear Re-Writes?

Fazbear Re-Writes is my new writing competition! Anyone can send me a submission and I'll read your story! Before going ahead and entering though, please take the time to read through the premise and the rules of the competition:

This competition is all about re-writing the Fazbear Frights stories. I had the idea to make a 'How Fazbear Frights Should've Ended' series, then I had the idea to turn it into a competition! The winners will have their stories presented in these videos :)

This is the first Fazbear Re-Writes competition, and we will be re-writing the following stories:

• Into The Pit

• To Be Beautiful

• Count The Ways

If you need a re-cap on the regular versions of these stories, you can find some summaries on this very site! (That's basically the purpose of the website, y'know?) You will be re-writing the stories from a certain point. We all know that the endings of the stories are what really brings it all together, so those are the parts that you are going to be re-writing.

You can choose which of the three stories you'd like to re-write. If you'd like, you can enter twice or three times and re-write each story!

You can also choose how you'd like the theme of the story to change. Would you like it to be a sentimental story? A funny story? A classic horror story? Psychological horror? What about a disturbing story? (yes) You are full of options and I can't wait to see all of the imaginative ways that these stories will divert!

For your selected story, make sure to read the prompt / guide below:

Into The Pit

In your version of Into The Pit, Oswald's family is still pretty poor and his best friend, Ben is still moved out of town due to the Mill closing three years ago. Summer is as boring as it could get - with no friends and no money, Oswald gets mad at his father and decides to hide from him in a ball-pit at Jeff's Pizza. The twist is however, the ball-pit actually takes him to ______.

• When and where does the ball-pit take him? Does it take him to Fredbear's in 1983? Will it take him to the Mega PizzaPlex in the future?

• Will Oswald enjoy his time there, or will he want to leave? Will Oswald manage to escape if he needs to?

• What will he find in the pit? Will he see something bad happen or will he discover something else?

• Will all of it be psychological, or will the ball-pit actually transport him through time/space?

• And of course, what will be the twist? Will he die or will he survive? Is it going to end on a cliff-hanger?

Oswald just sank into the ball-pit and you have control of what happens next, starting from when he rises from the pit.

To Be Beautiful

In your version of To Be Beautiful, Sarah's biggest dream is still to become more beautiful. She wishes she can be part of the popular group called The Beautifuls, and has no hope with her crush, Mason. That is until one day, when she finds an Eleanor robot at a junkyard, who wants to help Sarah in becoming more beautiful. To do this, she ______.

• How is Eleanor going to make her more beautiful? Will she still use illusion technology or will she use another method? Maybe she doesn't even manage to do it?

• What will be the repercussions to Sarah becoming more beautiful, if any? Will it drain Eleanor's or her power? Will Sarah's newfound ego wreak havoc?

• Will Eleanor stay in Sarah's life in secret, or will she tell and try to use the powers on other people?

• What does Sarah's best friend, Abby think of Sarah's transformation? Will her suspicion lead to an investigation behind closed doors?

• And of course, what will be the twist? Will Sarah die or will she survive? Is it going to end on a cliff-hanger?

Sarah takes the Eleanor robot back to her room, cleans her up and activates her. You now have control of how Eleanor reacts.

Count The Ways

In your version of Count The Ways, Millie's goth lifestyle still shows a bad side - her jealousy over Dylan makes her angry, she doesn't eat well and she doesn't celebrate Christmas with her family. Instead, she hides and falls asleep inside of the Funtime Freddy in her Grandpa's workshop. When she wakes up, she finds ______.

• What happens when she wakes up? Will Funtime Freddy still trap her, or will Grandpa find her hiding in there?

• Has Millie actually woken up, or will everything be a dream? Will she wake up possessing Freddy?

• Will she be able to control Freddy, or maybe Funtime Freddy is just a friend who wants to help her out?

• How will Millie's family feel about Millie's disappearance / return?

• And of course, what will be the twist? Will Millie die or will she survive? Is it going to end on a cliff-hanger?

Millie fell asleep inside of Funtime Freddy and soon after she finally wakes up. You now control what she sees and does.