Read the paragraph below.
Galang is at the school bazaar. The bazaar is held to raise funds for Bhinneka Orphanage. He participates in the event by selling his preloved items, which are in good condition. They are a pair of sneakers, two backpacks, a pair of jeans, a T-shirt, and a shirt. Galang feels excited about the school bazaar. Galang hopes to get 100,000 rupiahs for his preloved clothing items. He will donate all his money to the orphanage near his school.
Your Turn
Rewrite the paragraph by changing the tense to the past tense and the subject from third person (he) to first person (I).
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I was at the school bazaar. The bazaar was held to raise funds for Bhinneka Orphanage. I participated in the event by selling my preloved items, which were in good condition. They were a pair of sneakers, two backpacks, a pair of jeans, a T-shirt, and a shirt. I felt excited about the school bazaar. I hoped to get 100,000 rupiahs for my preloved clothing items. I would donate all my money to the orphanage near my school.