I chose to revise my second project of ENC 2135, a rhetorical analysis of two artifacts that concern the use of plastic-degrading bacteria. In my original essay, I noticed that I focused on simply describing the usage of rhetorical strategies in both artifacts. In my revised essay, I analyzed the effectiveness of these strategies by considering how well they responded to the rhetorical situation. I highlighted the sections I added to make it easier to compare the original and revised versions.