Essay #1

Reflection of Essay 1

One of the greatest challenges for me was essay structure. I don’t know how to write arguments smoothly in the essay. I forgot to write a thesis of the essay in the first paragraph, some details in the second and third paragraphs. I fixed the above problems after I got feedback from peer review.

I learned MLA format and sentence structures from last summary. These knowledge helped me a lot. My essay looks better after I used MLA format. I am thankful for peer’s and professor’s feedback. It leads me to understand what english essay looks like. I understand essay structure from them. I wanted to write the essay in english fluently in a academic level. I know I should study hard and do more practice in order to become a good writer. I think I better study sentence structure, verb forms and my vocabulary more.